My Beloved Young Mother

Sacrificing her childhood at an early age of sixteen ,been wedded to an elderly man of thirty,lacked intimacy and understanding with my dad, amid lot of risk & struggle had given birth to me at the age of seventeen; acquiring no warmth neither from parents nor spouse~ she wrestled alone Without happiness & support she survived in this enormous city taking care of me, gradually gifted me a sibling when I turned four.Though we were deprived of food we filled our stomachs with pure love fed by her in abundance. benevolently given birth to her children~ in the unknown world To provide us education she strived arduous to claim source of income from her imperfect life partner;Feeling disgusted at one point of time, lost patience and found a difficult chore in a bijou factory (since she had no education) eminently suffering health problems ,gave up after we requested her. fatigued by tussles swiftly sought occupation~ fell ill aftermath Luckily, I completed my graduation and immediately acquired job for supporting my family.Now I can find a little comfort in her lovely eyes.Though not entirely, at least she is blissful that I am independent.Now, wishing her second child(my brother) to complete his studies successfully without any hurdles. altruistic soul with thirsty eyes now awaits ~ for his victory.
Aug 13, 2020. Note:Let the pens flow..Haibun- poetry Contest. Sponsored by Jenish Somadas.
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George   Avatar
September 22, 2020 at 11:35 AM
Like Susan say, a deeply moving and intimate tribute to your beloved mother. So many women of my mother's era, endured the same. God bless them each and every one. Many congrat's on your win.
Ashley Avatar
September 18, 2020 at 4:45 PM
Your poem is a deeply moving and intimate tribute to your beloved mother. Emotion and imagery flows effortlessly from your talented pen, V. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Somadas Avatar
September 16, 2020 at 11:36 PM
Congrats on your win Deepa.. A touching story..
Deepa Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Thankyou dear Jenish sir for motivating me to take up this new poetic form :-)This is my first try. Am glad your liked the story. Take care.Warm regards to you:-)
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2020 at 6:08 PM
wow, she is super young, V. She sounds so marvelous and I can see your heart poured into this. You are doing her proud, and I am sure she knows this!
Deepa Avatar
September 17, 2020 at 12:37 PM
Yes...dear Andrea mam..she is a wonderful personality filled with love and kindness..:-)Yup ,mum is proud of me..but doesn't know about my poetry works. Thankyou for your kind words. Take care.Much love:-)
Cunningham Avatar
August 17, 2020 at 3:33 PM
She sounds an amazing lady Deepa, you must be so proud of her. Tom
Deepa Avatar
August 18, 2020 at 2:46 AM
Hello Tom sir, Thankyou.Yes, she is a gem, am truly proud of her.:-) I believe your doing fine..! Take care.Warmest regards:-)
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 3:49 PM
Hello Deepa, your mother has gone through rough times. Times are hard whether single or married,or widowed. But your mom has come a long way, and one day will have grandchildren. She id the bet she could at those times. She now has you and your brother to be proud of. Much love Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 3:56 PM
Hello Deepa, I know you will keep your mom happy. Enjoy your evening my friend. Much love Darlene
Deepa Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 6:58 AM
Yes, Darlene mam. You are right.Mother's love is immeasurable..!! Sure, we will keep her happy.Thankyou mam:-) Have a lovely day.Much love:-)
Pandit Avatar
August 13, 2020 at 2:25 PM
This is quite a touching story, Deepa. Kudos to you and your family for overcoming obstacles that many face. You should be very proud of yourself for completing your education and supporting your family. Your poem delivers on your theme brilliantly. ..In some ways I too can relate to your story.
Deepa Avatar
August 14, 2020 at 6:55 AM
Thankyou Vijay sir for your lovely appreciation and uplifting words:-) Yes, I am proud about myself sir. Am surprised to know that you can relate to my story. Anyways let's be strong and spread our knowledge and smile to everyone around us.:-) Take care.Have a wonderful day.Warm regards sent..:-)
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