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My Beloved Pet

I love my pet - ignore those who would scorn, Question, my adoration proudly worn. I can spill my guts freely without fear Always here to listen yet will never sneer. Where can you find this type of loyalty? More than just my pet but like family. He never does any tricks commanded, Nor acts in ways to be remanded. Always quiet, calm, always well behaved. He never complains in bad weather braved. Easy to care for, never a worry. At times so proud my eyes teared and blurry. Sleeps next to me lightly he is my rock! Yes I repeat with pride he's my Pet Rock. 19~11~2014 Sponsor: Shadow Hamilton Contest Name: Pets

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Date: 11/30/2015 3:42:00 PM
I really adored this beauty of a pet, you've written for the contest... I love all the beauty of any kind of pet, whether it be cat, dog, parrot or any other animal... This poem really makes me appreciate my pet even more... sending warm hugs to you Maurice from Theresa
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Date: 12/1/2014 1:11:00 PM
adorable citation for your pet, Maurice.. big congrats on your win and thanks for your cheers re my piece on ' heart of imagination'.. I didn't see it till you pointed it out... much appreciated!.. huggs
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Date: 11/30/2014 10:39:00 AM
Maurice, very sweet words about your dear pet. Yes, they do provide that unconditional love...much to learn from them. Congratulations on your win! Sandra
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Date: 11/30/2014 12:02:00 AM
Your pet Rock,surprise yet unique; congrats on the win Maurice....huggs
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Date: 11/29/2014 5:37:00 PM
Nicely done. Not one of my favorite pets though. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/29/2014 1:23:00 PM
Wonderful qualities that rock of yours. I just wonder how much love it gives you and if you'll remember it when it's gone. Congratulations on your win Maurice.
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:49:00 PM
Sounds like the most sensible Pet - no grooming feeding or vets bills - spot on ! Many congrats my friend:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 11/29/2014 7:54:00 AM
lovely Maurice congrats on win and ty for your support hugs
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/29/2014 8:01:00 AM
Thank you Shadow for placing me it is much appreciated.
Date: 11/29/2014 6:26:00 AM
I love the ending Maurice.....funny stuff...well written...Congrats on your win
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Date: 11/21/2014 11:03:00 PM
Hilarious, loved it, put pets do you leave you, a few penthouse pets sure left me!!!
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Date: 11/19/2014 6:40:00 PM
Love the humour Maurice - got to say you 'rock' my friend:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/19/2014 4:11:00 PM
AWESOME ending!!! Maurice, I have to rush home now but I want to go over your sonnet with you. You started with perfect meter and then it kind of gave out. But as for rhyme and style, that is all GREAT. i will review this later, I promise, in a soupmail to discuss the aspect of iamabic pentameter!
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Date: 11/19/2014 11:32:00 AM
Oh I hope you don't have to settle for a pet rock. Pets can be so magnificently loyal and loving. Thank you for your more than kind comments on my entry. I will cherish your words. Love, Joyce
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Date: 11/19/2014 8:10:00 AM
Nice pet...I hear he can roll over and play dead
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Tim Smith
Date: 11/19/2014 8:41:00 AM
Dont give him too many brownies....
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 11/19/2014 8:24:00 AM
Well I don't know about roll over, but yes he can play dead especially when he gets stoned!

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