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My Beloved Man - For Love Talks Contest

Lover 1 my beloved man, as gentle as falling leaves, as strong as the wind. Lover 2 my loving lady, beautiful as the morning and warm as the sun, your love is my foundation, without you I would crumble.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/20/2011 11:09:00 AM

good grief, Jack, I fear I am doomed. All those poets who I comment to regularly, if they had old poems I had not seen, that's all that I was able to do, was to comment to their old poems. I have clicked on five old poems of yours going back as far as I can. I think I've seen all your poems!! Try to write a new one every day for me. haha. LUv, Andrea PS and of course, this one was as lovely as ever.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/6/2011 2:37:00 PM

That reads like a great relationship..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I am glad that you did not get hurt..That winter ice is deadly for sure..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/9/2011 12:20:00 AM

Very straighforward ones, and beautiful ones.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2011 8:25:00 AM

Jack, I loved this duet piece! You have so much passion in your heart. Any lady would be lucky to have someone so romantic in their life. Very nice! Love, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/6/2011 10:03:00 AM

Hi Jack, we haven't spoken before so I'm not sure you know, but myself, Chris A. & Charles H. have all done blogs on the homepage regarding how to write haiku & I have one on tanka if you read them I think it will be of help to you. Light & Love