My Bed

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My bed, the place I love the most
in my small universe
While in it, I am the perfect host
I entertain and I converse

There I can push the pain away
And words are flowing freely
Why not let me forever stay
Where I so much wish to be?

Aim is to fixate part of my back
While strengthening the rest
I know it's needed, but just YECK!
I think, just let it rest, rest...

So here I am, depressed they say
But I say realistic
But I'll give in to them either way
Make them feel fantastic

I close my eyes, no I don't sleep
My words are flowing freely
Unlike my tears, I only weep
Online, on Soup, yeah... really....

Enjoy, oh readers of this whining ;)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 10/12/2016 11:20:00 AM
This is the stuff and place where dreams are made and perhaps, fulfilled. Nice write.
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Darren White
Date: 10/12/2016 11:23:00 AM
Thank you so much, from the top mattress of my lovely bed :)
Date: 10/12/2016 8:05:00 AM
If that is YOUR bed in the pic Darren you will have more than a bad back if you fall out of it! You need time to heal and if bed rest is ordered then that is what you must do :-) Keep the pen flowing and have a read of my poems - that will soon get you to sleep lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Darren White
Date: 10/12/2016 8:08:00 AM
Thanks Jan, nice bed, huh? :D Time to sleep, see you later!
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