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My Beautiful Dream

 
And in my dream- I stand in a frozen woodland, the air is cold, quiet, the sky is black as ink; I wear a gorgeous red velvet cape quite grand. Branches hold up icicles that drip with a clink, my hair falls long and raven- like fluid divine; the air is cold, quiet, the sky is black as ink. And snow is falling like drifting crystals that shine, from afar, I hear the melody of a bell; my hair falls long and raven- like fluid divine. Before me is a black horse like a magic spell, on his neck, a red ribbon holds a bell-- tinkling; from afar, I hear the melody of a bell. Above, in the pretty night sky stars are twinkling, the snow a blizzard and we are lost in this dream; on his neck, a red ribbon holds a bell- twinkling. Above, in the pretty night sky stars are twinkling, and in my dream- I stand in a frozen woodland; the snow a blizzard and we are lost in this dream, I wore a gorgeous red velvet cape- quite grand. ______________________ February 14, 2017 Poetry/Terzanelle/My Beautiful Dream Copyright Protected, ID 17- 876-135-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the contest, Beautiful, Sponsor Silent One Second Place
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Robinson Jr. Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Such a dreamy, night vision of beauty, BW. Wonderful imagery that elicits passionate feelings of romance. A jewel of a poem, dear. A 7 all night long. Love and hugs to you.
La France Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 7:17 PM
Freddie, thanks for the nice comment and the 7
Rycroft Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 9:31 AM
Congrats well-done x
La France Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 7:18 PM
Wendy thanks for the congratulations
Wanter Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 6:57 PM
Beautiful is right! Thank you for another fav.
La France Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 7:57 PM
Sun thanks for the beautiful and fav
Krampe Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 6:03 PM
Truly beautiful! Good luck in the contest.
La France Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 7:55 PM
Agnes Thank you for visiting
Green Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 5:29 PM
This is an incredibly beautiful poetic dream. Really nicely done.
La France Avatar
February 14, 2017 at 7:54 PM
Chris thank you for the beautiful, appreciate
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