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Challenging Indolence

Looking at the mirror …with good day’s pleasure I see indolence-glamor …gripping me with delight’s leisure Yet ready to attack my sense of honor …for me to defy time-worth’s treasure Such a deceiving foe; not a generous donor …offering me gift that costs much pressure! Today, I challenge you, my sluggard laziness' suitor …upon your procrastination’s grandeur I’m aware of your wastefulness’ color …since my daily schedule you want to injure I fight you for putting me in meaninglessness’ rigor …against unjustified torture Dampening my work-ardor …by your entertainment-indulgence culture! I now combat fruitlessness’ horror …in striving for a productive future While trusting God* with His grace-anchor …I press on by His might so sure!
*Proverbs 28:25 He that is of a proud heart stirreth up strife: but he that putteth his trust in the LORD shall be made fat. July 5, 2018 1st Place, "Standard No. 100..." Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand: judged on 7/7/2018.

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Date: 7/9/2018 1:12:00 PM
The temptation to put aside our work and duties is often hard to resist, Beata! What will we reap if we don't till our fields! ~ Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 9:14:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks.
Date: 7/8/2018 9:46:00 PM
Beata, you've articulated your feelings very well.. Congratulations on your awesome win! Hugs Eve
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 9:14:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks.
Date: 7/7/2018 8:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I know the feeling. I ask daily for the strength to do what I need to do each day, and I get it. Well done!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 9:15:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks.
Date: 7/7/2018 7:25:00 AM
Well done, Beata. Congrats on your top win.
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 9:15:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks.
Date: 7/6/2018 8:56:00 PM
I feel the heaviness of your battle.. one so many fight. Nice write, Beata!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/9/2018 9:15:00 PM
Praise God. Thanks.

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