My Back Yard's View

I come to the railing of my deck
and look out on the view which every day I see.
A yard which is still surprisingly green
despite our summer’s drought
is flanked on three sides by wire fencing.
The scene is serene, and wind is wafting softly.
The leaves on the maple to my left wave back and forth
much more than do the leaves on branches 
of the two other trees directly opposite the maple.

Occasional noise from engines cuts the silence,
for not too far beyond the farthest fence there is a street.
Directly across from my back yard fence is a canal.
It was covered over to provide a smooth concrete path
on which bikers, dog-walkers and  joggers I can sometimes see.
Today I notice none of these, but I hear a bird sing,
for beyond me stand hundreds of treetops.
My city long ago was but a giant grove of trees!
Sky is white and slightly tinged grey, yet still the sun shines down
as I watch the limbs of assorted trees in the near distance 
dancing.

July 31, 2021
Submitted for Emile Pinet's Imagism Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 9/2/2021 4:59:00 AM
Lovely writing... Wonderfully done. Congrats and much love, God bless you always, Gina
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Date: 9/1/2021 8:17:00 AM
Very lovely. CONGRATS on your win, Andrea. Janice
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Date: 9/1/2021 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations Andrea, your poem earned a distinguished place in my contest. Very well done, it was a pleasure to read it my friend, Emile.
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Date: 8/24/2021 11:00:00 PM
I feel I'm actually there! :) Great imagery Andrea. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 8/1/2021 2:00:00 AM
Great imagery of your backyard... I know how much you love to lay in sunshine and write...Best wishes sweet friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 8/1/2021 1:30:00 AM
Concrete is slowly creeping over parkland, we all hunger for free open spaces. Quote: My city long ago was but a giant grove of trees! This image speaks the truth...Delice good luck in the contest...
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Date: 7/31/2021 11:04:00 PM
Your muse must have been working overtime. Great imagery. Hugs.
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Date: 7/31/2021 1:45:00 PM
Andrea, this is almost ephrasistic. Beautiful. I remember when I loved with such a scene, but alas, I now live in a suburb-type situation. But, I see the old place in my mind and often write about it. You are blessed, and you have a marvelous gift for creating images. Write on!
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Date: 7/31/2021 1:18:00 PM
Love the imagery Andrea, nothing beats being outside in the fresh air. Hope weekend is going well. Tom
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Date: 7/31/2021 12:03:00 PM
Wonderful imagery my friend. When I look out my window... all I see are parked cars. Not very inspirational. Fine effort. Stay well.
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Date: 7/31/2021 11:33:00 AM
A terrific poem Andrea my friend. Even without the grove of trees which surrounded your city, the scene you portray is one of scenic beauty and tranquility. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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