My Baby Sister

For My Darling Little Sister, My Punky
I was the baby until my parents spoke of a surprise that in seven months would appear before my eyes. So, when seven, a babe came perfectly brand new. I loved my baby dolls, so she was a dream come true. Bro gave her a nickname that would stick like glue. My universe would have lacked a great loving feel if each year had not revealed more of her to adore. Today, Punky, you do turn fifty, but what I see is the feel of you as a curled-up preciousness bundle lying in bed to cuddle-sleep with me. In day, you would constantly rumble and stumble; At night, lay as a pure, perfect, tender bundle. You displayed the complete sweetness, baby love; I had dreamed of and imagined in childhood play. I love and enjoy the person you did become! If being age fifty should ever overwhelm, remember, to me, you are also number one. Like silk, your presence spins warm rays of light that brighten and adorn my personal world, where you will always be my beloved, baby girl.
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January 18, 2016 at 8:35 AM
CayCay, Congratulations on your lovely win. Love the subject..... SKAT **
Gentry Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:35 PM
Congratulations on your win with this wonderful poem about your sister.
Allison Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:23 PM
this is delightful CayCay congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Scars Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 5:18 PM
Yay baby! Congrats on your top placement lovely lady CayCay! So proud of you!!!-*smiles*-luloo
Roper Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 4:35 PM
CayCay, congratulations on your placement on my “When Older Siblings or Younger Step In”... contest. A wonderful tribute to your younger sister, a bond of love for each other. Hugs Eve
Onclaud Avatar
January 15, 2016 at 4:24 PM
how touching, cay.. best cheers on your win.. right!..huggs
Scars Avatar
December 31, 2015 at 6:10 PM
You write with such an easy flow CayCay...very well written..Perfect for the contest! good luck! -*SMILES* luloo
Gasun Avatar
December 22, 2015 at 9:40 AM
I'm so delighted to read these wonderful dedications/poems to your lovely sisters, my dear friend, Caycay. You're lucky to have them and vise versa. When I was a child, I wished I'll have a sister to play with my dolls, but unfortunately I wasn't gifted even 1, so I played with my cousins who were also "only girl" in the family. I enjoyed your poem! Thank you so much for sharing! Thank you so much as well for generously sharing your precious time to read my poems! I'll be back! love lots,Leonora
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December 21, 2015 at 3:22 PM
I enjoyed this lovely and sweet double poem, CayCay. Reminds me of my younger sister...very similar situation. Up till now (after more than fifty years) we still regard her as our baby sister! She'll be celebrating her birthday on 25th Dec! ~ Regards // paul
Dietrich Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 8:23 PM
oh my what a nicname to be stuck with. Just finished that first part. so cute. now I will read about adult sister!! wow, so special this sister is. It's strange to remember them as babies and see them so much older now. and US too. this is marvelous, CayCay. I just know it will do splendidly in the contest.
Woods    Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:57 AM
Forgot the 7
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December 20, 2015 at 11:50 AM
I'm envious, I was very close to my sister until she got under the spell of the wicked witch of the west. Its a good write CayCay and very touching, and right up there with your very bestest : )
Godwin Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Try pouring water on your sister. I shouldn't tease, siblings are friends who cannot really desert us, even when apart, siblings are each other's history and memories, at the least. You may remember the writing about my brother who lives as a down and out addict leaving me doubly blessed to have my bigger, little sister. I truly enjoyed your comments and thank you for the 7 (I tend to forget that little digit, too) ... CayCay
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December 20, 2015 at 5:48 AM
I loved this heart warming piece. I love it when siblings are close. My youngest had her older sister and brother fighting over who was getting to care for her next. They are still all close. Doesn't hurt that all three are Scorpios born in the first week of November!
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December 20, 2015 at 6:57 AM
I have written my sister many poems over the years, but this 'true' write was inspired by the contest and I can't help but be glad of it because I'm flooded with memories each time I read it. I would have begun praying for you long ago if I'd known you had 3 Scorpion children. Thank you for the uplifting comments. Again, thank you, Connie ... CayCay
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