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My Baby Boy


We dressed him in an ivory lace christening gown,
      That had been handed down generation to generation;
I asked my mother and grandmother if it was okay and they said yes,
            My baby boy was perfect and he looked so very sweet, just sleeping.

I held him to my heart and my husband did too,
      We kissed him and whispered our forever love with tears;
And when it was time, sadly we both gently placed him in his little coffin,
            That day was a nightmare that I will relive over and over, till my end.

There was a long row of cars winding down the road,
      The cemetery seemed to hush, even the birds were quiet,
And then we were standing at my baby's grave, oh the weeping, 
            The sounds drifted in the air and amongst the many drooping trees.

Even the angel statues in the cemetery turned and wept his death,
      I stood there with my parents holding hands, my husband stood apart;
Oh his face was set in cold stone and he took his deep grief to his own grave,
            As they lowered the coffin it started to rain-      and I lifted up my face.

My mother whispered in my ear, even the angels in heaven are weeping,
      I go to his resting place often and bring a white rose for my little baby,
And as I walk that winding road, the angel statues lower their heads and weep,
            For in my eyes-  is a deep pain that will shatter your heart if you dare look.

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May 2, 2016

Poetry/Verse/My Baby Boy
Copyright Protected, ID 16-784-857-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Submitted to the contest,  First  Place Only
Sponsor, Laura Loo

Second Place
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Submitted to the contest, Your Own Favorite Poem
sponsor, Carol Eastman

First Place
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Submitted to the contest, A Poem You Are Proud Of- 2
sponsor, Skat

Fifth Place
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Edmonds  Avatar
February 13, 2024 at 3:04 PM
Very sad Constance, I feel the pain that remains. Beryl
La France Avatar
February 14, 2024 at 4:51 AM
Beryl, thank you for going back to one of my old poems, this one was very hard to write, I recall a lot of tears, hugs, Constance
Kimathi Avatar
July 8, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
U.D Palawon  Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 12:21 AM
That's great! Congrats on your write great image and words!
Scars Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 2:42 PM
Broken Wings, I always loved this one...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Devnath  Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 9:20 PM
Congrats on your win my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
A  Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:19 PM
Broken Wings, this was one of Royal's placements. Congratulations on the win. Stop and enjoy my blog "Peace is a Fugitive." SKAT LOVE
Horne Avatar
May 10, 2016 at 3:27 PM
oh, this is just beautiful, my friend. I think I managed to enter your contest before it closed. Hope you & the kitties are having a great day x
Makama Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 1:26 PM
This is is fine piece with soul-reaching quality. I love this so much
Martin Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Wonderful, constance! good luck in contest.
La France Avatar
May 5, 2016 at 11:24 AM
Thomas thanks for the wonderful
Tagore Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 8:54 AM
You are the Queen of broken hearts... your tattered pages still haunt me... my sincere kudos...love, Bobby
La France Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 12:37 PM
Bobby thanks for visiting my poem today and for the compliment! Writing sad poetry is my forte and I seem able to make my emotions raw and heartbreaking
Sathasivam Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 2:53 AM
Excellent. Very touching and poignant write. Thanks for sharing it.
La France Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Ravi, thanks for the excellent ~
Quigley Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 9:35 PM
Speechlessly sad. Amazing write.
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:11 PM
Tom, thank you for the amazing, yes reality can be sad !
Scars Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:41 PM
I can't speak...No words to say Broken Wings..now I know where your name comes from..This is 1st place worthy times ten. Every time I read a poem about a loss you've endured my throat closes up and I get tears in my eyes. My daughters middle name is Rose and her favorite flower is a white rose. Touched my heart...be blessed...-Laura
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:10 PM
Laura, thank you for your forever compassion and understanding of my grief, I appreciate your friendship so much !
Maverick Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 3:58 PM
A very compelling write Constance, I had a glimpse at it, and felt so much raw emotion, I did not want to intrude further I may return to it if I can 'steel myself' I wish the blessings of God on you.'
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:09 PM
Joe, I understand, my poetry can be hard to read sometimes, it is raw with emotion as you say...
Dietrich Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 3:23 PM
VERY poignant this is .One to touch the heart deeply, Constance. Excellent entry.
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:08 PM
Andrea, thanks so much for the compliment ~
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:15 PM
a most compelling and pensive write so well delivered, constance... your angel is now smiling!.. huggs
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:07 PM
Nette, thank you so much for reading my poem and for your comment, you are very sweet !
Inman Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:38 AM
I'm sure I've said this before in comments to other poems you've written, so, forgive my repetition, sad and Beautiful BW.
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:06 PM
James, you can say it a thousand zillion times and I will love you for it each time ~
Dalei Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:50 AM
Dear BW, I adore ur skill. A heartfelt creation for a cute angel. I feel very very sad after reading. God bless u to go ahead. A great tribute to ur child. Best wishes for the contest.......hugs
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:57 AM
MN, thanks for the nice comment and congratulations
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:33 AM
Did you mean "If you dare look" for your last line. The poem of course is both excellent and heartbreaking.
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:47 AM
Richard, oh thanks for spotting that typo and for the compliment
Daniel Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 1:02 AM
I'm really sad to know that this is your true story:( My heartfelt love to you:):) the deep pain that reflects in your poem touches my very soul... P.S: In the last line, don't you mean "will shatter" and "dare look"?
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 7:59 AM
Jo, thanks for spotting the typos , my eyesight is not good and thanks for the beautiful comment
Raynes Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 11:39 PM
Your write just struck me deep. Sending all my love your way. x
La France Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:04 PM
Lewis, thank you for reading my poem and for the compassion
Tanwar Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 5:24 PM
i am being so into this poem....juct touched the floor of my heart.......
La France Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 5:41 PM
Manu, thank you so much for the compassionate comment, appreciate !
Allison Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 4:26 PM
I'm in tears here Constance - such a heartbreaking story that I know is sadly true:-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
La France Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 5:43 PM
Jan, thanks for the compassion, and hugs !
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