My Awakening

A far off memory that's like a scattered dream..
...a scattered dream that's like a far of memory..
..I want to line the pieces up...

Yours...

And mine

Let me tell you my story
As I traversed through the visions of my mind..
Sketching, writing..seeking to find
I sought for assistance from spirit within
Searching and questioning intimately 
Asking God to guide
High school was over and I felt free from shackles
Seeing tonl stretch endlessly far behind me
Little did I know what awaited me..
With time on my hands..I searched valiantly
For the pieces God wished to fashion upon me
Humbly I read, meditated and linked
Began a take a book I was writing seriously
I named it Asunder
It was about the story of two identical brothers
Same in flesh, placed in different perceptions
Yin and yang..
I yet to finish this novel so il leave the story on a cliff hang

Finished with chapter 1
On to the other
 I was about to continue my writing
Then a vision came upon me
It's chain of thoughts stretched like a vase sea of dreams
Links upon links it connected to reality
Such a simple sign
Gave birth to my sight from my blind

So much to keep in ones mind
I started a journal so I could look back and find
What questions may be answered behind
I found no fault in its simplicity it's ultimate truth
It was holy and full of fruit
Simple as 123
Quite literally 
The idea rose from the yin yang symbol that I drew
I did it out of unconscious inspiration 
Who knew
I thought about life as a coin two sides but one
Then as a book
 Because of the line that swerved through 
Then I visualized it as in comparison of the big 3
I'm thinking...this is really cool
 the Father the son and holy spirit
Speaking so clear to me..I could hear it
If we are the image of God then we are a reflection
A image shattered because of Lucifer..
Then brought back through a connection 
The word
The bringer of God's thoughts 
Voice of the unheard

A simpe picture that made complete since
With what I was correlating
The river of life and a scroll I saw as I peared deeper
A secret just waiting 

My own voice in my head seemed to swim in smooth motion 
As if breaching from the other side in one notion

At this I was amazed..
But also shocked
For I thought how could I figure this out?

A very serious question I ponder
Then it hit me..my mind it felt just wondered
I looked to the mirror
 sae a face i thought was familar
At that moment I saw not me..
But one who..
Had the face of eternity
-to be continued
 Yes, True story

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/28/2016 9:02:00 AM
This seems like a familiar quest to me, the search for truth and meaning ~ hope you find what you are looking for. (Hate to be the Spelling Police but unless you intended them, there are many.) Still a good write.
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/28/2016 9:53:00 AM
Thanks*
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/28/2016 9:52:00 AM
Lol thanks and I know. I forgot to review it, same for the notices man
Date: 7/5/2016 7:44:00 PM
Hi Justin, You have penned a deep spiritual write. I see many things in this piece that has a dream like quality. I can't wait to read the book. The title fits this write very well" My Awakening " .:-) Alexis
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/5/2016 7:51:00 PM
Thanks Might be a while til it gets published,ive got some other stuff on working on at the moment but it'l get finished...eventually lol
Date: 7/1/2016 12:07:00 PM
You have a lot more than two parts my friend..Stay awake and go ''Into the Wild''Take care,Justin B
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/1/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks.. Also if you mean Justin b as in Justin Bieber .then thanks but no thanks..I'm kinda a metal head..you know war of ages, sleeping giant,..thirty seconds to Mars lol but thanks anyways and many blessings PS. I'm kinda already onto the wilds lol o love in AL
Date: 6/30/2016 11:07:00 PM
Peace be unto you and many many more blessings my friend.
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Justin Worthy
Date: 6/30/2016 11:11:00 PM
To you as well. Stories not quite finished yet...I'm thinking it will have two more parts before I've written it all..all that has been fulfilled of yet anyway
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