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My Awakening

A far off memory that's like a scattered dream.. ...a scattered dream that's like a far of memory.. ..I want to line the pieces up... Yours... And mine Let me tell you my story As I traversed through the visions of my mind.. Sketching, writing..seeking to find I sought for assistance from spirit within Searching and questioning intimately Asking God to guide High school was over and I felt free from shackles Seeing tonl stretch endlessly far behind me Little did I know what awaited me.. With time on my hands..I searched valiantly For the pieces God wished to fashion upon me Humbly I read, meditated and linked Began a take a book I was writing seriously I named it Asunder It was about the story of two identical brothers Same in flesh, placed in different perceptions Yin and yang.. I yet to finish this novel so il leave the story on a cliff hang Finished with chapter 1 On to the other I was about to continue my writing Then a vision came upon me It's chain of thoughts stretched like a vase sea of dreams Links upon links it connected to reality Such a simple sign Gave birth to my sight from my blind So much to keep in ones mind I started a journal so I could look back and find What questions may be answered behind I found no fault in its simplicity it's ultimate truth It was holy and full of fruit Simple as 123 Quite literally The idea rose from the yin yang symbol that I drew I did it out of unconscious inspiration Who knew I thought about life as a coin two sides but one Then as a book Because of the line that swerved through Then I visualized it as in comparison of the big 3 I'm thinking...this is really cool the Father the son and holy spirit Speaking so clear to me..I could hear it If we are the image of God then we are a reflection A image shattered because of Lucifer.. Then brought back through a connection The word The bringer of God's thoughts Voice of the unheard A simpe picture that made complete since With what I was correlating The river of life and a scroll I saw as I peared deeper A secret just waiting My own voice in my head seemed to swim in smooth motion As if breaching from the other side in one notion At this I was amazed.. But also shocked For I thought how could I figure this out? A very serious question I ponder Then it hit me..my mind it felt just wondered I looked to the mirror sae a face i thought was familar At that moment I saw not me.. But one who.. Had the face of eternity -to be continued Yes, True story

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Date: 7/28/2016 9:02:00 AM
This seems like a familiar quest to me, the search for truth and meaning ~ hope you find what you are looking for. (Hate to be the Spelling Police but unless you intended them, there are many.) Still a good write.
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/28/2016 9:53:00 AM
Thanks*
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/28/2016 9:52:00 AM
Lol thanks and I know. I forgot to review it, same for the notices man
Date: 7/5/2016 7:44:00 PM
Hi Justin, You have penned a deep spiritual write. I see many things in this piece that has a dream like quality. I can't wait to read the book. The title fits this write very well" My Awakening " .:-) Alexis
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/5/2016 7:51:00 PM
Thanks Might be a while til it gets published,ive got some other stuff on working on at the moment but it'l get finished...eventually lol
Date: 7/1/2016 12:07:00 PM
You have a lot more than two parts my friend..Stay awake and go ''Into the Wild''Take care,Justin B
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Justin Worthy
Date: 7/1/2016 12:19:00 PM
Thanks.. Also if you mean Justin b as in Justin Bieber .then thanks but no thanks..I'm kinda a metal head..you know war of ages, sleeping giant,..thirty seconds to Mars lol but thanks anyways and many blessings PS. I'm kinda already onto the wilds lol o love in AL
Date: 6/30/2016 11:07:00 PM
Peace be unto you and many many more blessings my friend.
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Justin Worthy
Date: 6/30/2016 11:11:00 PM
To you as well. Stories not quite finished yet...I'm thinking it will have two more parts before I've written it all..all that has been fulfilled of yet anyway

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