My Avocado Fridge

Our house was built in 'sixty-eight,
     a long bi-level, brick, and white.
A retro queen I was those days,
     and avocado made it right.

The kitchen was my favored place – 
     appliances in "sixties" green;
refrigerator, matching stove,
     completed well that retro scene.

For many years they lasted well -
     and replaced once; the find was tough!
But later on, my luck ran out – 
     no avocado kitchen stuff.

The second fridge broke down one day;
     a new one had to come real fast.
A plain old white one took its place,
     and I was left distressed, aghast!

My retro strove looked lonely, sad
     without its avocado mate;
Its matching fridge, now she was gone – 
     he knew this soon would be his fate.

Oh, how I miss those retro days!
     Appliance colors were such fun!
That avocado cherished green
     refridge and stove, compared to none!

Now stainless, white, is where it's at – 
     appliances, their brilliance lack.
Perhaps the pendulum will swing – 
     bring retro avocado back!


September 11, 2015

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 10/20/2015 8:14:00 PM
So nice to read your writing this evening, belated congrads! Light & Love
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/24/2015 10:19:00 PM
Hi Debbie, thank you so much for visiting my poem and for your supportive comment and congratulations! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 10/13/2015 1:05:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Sandra!
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Date: 10/10/2015 12:06:00 PM
Sandra, Congrats on your wonderful win. **SKAT**
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Date: 10/9/2015 5:36:00 PM
Sandra, congratulations on your win!!! Enjoyed reading they don't make appliance like they use toooo
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Date: 10/9/2015 1:02:00 PM
I have stainless and don't like it much. To hard to take care of. I do like retro "stuff", and I like your poem. Congrats. BG
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Date: 10/9/2015 10:51:00 AM
Time will bring the fashion around again, just like it always does. I am only afraid that the stainless craze may last too long. Wonderful write and congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/9/2015 10:01:00 AM
I remember thinking all those colored appliances were so great......getting away from the plain white that our mothers had. And then white was back again. Nothing seems to last......now it you aren't into Stainless Steel.....you are behind the times. (I am keeping my white!!! LOL) Such a cute poem!!
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Date: 10/9/2015 9:04:00 AM
Avocado Green, Harvest Yellow or Brown - I admit I was there, small, but there. I must be retro, too - oh no, I didn't need my mind to go there! Sandra, I am so glad this winner, won! ... CayCay
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Date: 10/9/2015 4:55:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/22/2015 8:08:00 PM
Excellent poem, I really enjoyed it. I know you want 'built' not 'build' in the first line of this delightful write ... CayCay
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/22/2015 8:52:00 PM
CayCay, thank you so much for your nice comments and for your excellent eyes! I appreciate you're letting me know, and fixed it! Thanks again. Sandra
Date: 9/12/2015 2:51:00 PM
Oh I Love how you did your tribute to an appliance, dear. I am gonna choose fridge too, but not for the same reason as you. It's cause that is where the GOOD STUFF Is kept!!
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Date: 9/11/2015 10:16:00 AM
Very vivid descriptive write Sandra good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
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Sandra Haight
Date: 9/11/2015 12:00:00 PM
Thanks, Jan. Just a fun one, but true! Hugs, Sandra
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