My Autumn Praise

Tanka 

As Autumn leaves fall 

Resting on earth in colours 

Cushioning my feet

Feeling their moisture, I sigh

Walking with my head hung low

White Wolf - 15/9/22
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Asuncion Avatar
June 2, 2025 at 8:20 PM
Brilliant tanka
Horsman Avatar
September 15, 2022 at 11:53 PM
Another Autumn, WW, we only get the one in life, Love your tanka, its heartfelt and powerful at the same time.
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September 14, 2022 at 3:33 PM
Sometimes, it is head up and glorious, and at others, it is hard to even take it all in. Nice.
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