My All

A destiny that soon became an escapade
There again he's caught up in a whirl pool                                          
But could not see that he's being played
How could one have then been such a fool

Though what a silly mistake that he'd made
To think that he’s giving her his heart, his all
And her the way that she would masquerade
Anyone would think that she's at some ball

And how dose he then keep up the facade
When one's knocked off there pede stool
This memorrie that never seems to fade
Her so smug but him thinking he's so cool

And feeling so angry but more so betrayed
The fact one can make you feel so small
What would have happed if he had stayed
To think that he's giving her his heart, his all



 


Why did I write this I feel like Ive took exerts from other writes like a bad case of nostalgia and broken
With this just a nother interpretation tring to get off this subject   not sure on couple of verses
if eveade or stayed would have been better lost intrest half way through
you decide give some tips if like WRITTEN 2012 BY DAVIDSCOTT,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
 if ANY OTHER MEMVERS COULD HELP ME WITH THIS LOST MY WAT A BIT WITH IT VERSE 3  AND 4
INSPIERD BY ALL THE COOL POETS ON SOUP
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note TO READERS UPDATED A LITTLE IN BETTER CONTEXT  SAME AS OTHERS IN THIS PATTERN
KALIEDOSCOPE   GUIDING LIGHT   TOMORROW   WONDERER   INSTILLS



NOTE OTHER WRITES IN THIS PATTERN  1 ATTRIBIUTES 2 KALIDOSCOPE 3 WONDERER  
4 IN STILLS  5 WORDS  6 SORROW 7MOODS 8 VITAGE

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