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A destiny that soon became an escapade There again he's caught up in a whirl pool But could not see that he's being played How could one have then been such a fool Though what a silly mistake that he'd made To think that he’s giving her his heart, his all And her the way that she would masquerade Anyone would think that she's at some ball And how dose he then keep up the facade When one's knocked off there pede stool This memorrie that never seems to fade Her so smug but him thinking he's so cool And feeling so angry but more so betrayed The fact one can make you feel so small What would have happed if he had stayed To think that he's giving her his heart, his all Why did I write this I feel like Ive took exerts from other writes like a bad case of nostalgia and broken With this just a nother interpretation tring to get off this subject not sure on couple of verses if eveade or stayed would have been better lost intrest half way through you decide give some tips if like WRITTEN 2012 BY DAVIDSCOTT,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, if ANY OTHER MEMVERS COULD HELP ME WITH THIS LOST MY WAT A BIT WITH IT VERSE 3 AND 4 INSPIERD BY ALL THE COOL POETS ON SOUP ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////// note TO READERS UPDATED A LITTLE IN BETTER CONTEXT SAME AS OTHERS IN THIS PATTERN KALIEDOSCOPE GUIDING LIGHT TOMORROW WONDERER INSTILLS NOTE OTHER WRITES IN THIS PATTERN 1 ATTRIBIUTES 2 KALIDOSCOPE 3 WONDERER 4 IN STILLS 5 WORDS 6 SORROW 7MOODS 8 VITAGE
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