My All
A destiny that became an escapade
There I was caught up in a whirl pool
But could not see I was being played
How could I have then been such a fool
And her the way she would mascerade
Anyone would think she's at some ball
Feeling angry but then more so betrayed
The fact I let her make me feel so small
And how dose he then keep up the facade
When one's knocked off there pede stool
This memorrie that never seems to fade
Her so smug but him thinking hes so cool
Though what a silly mistake that I'd made
To think that I was now giving her my all
What would have happed if he had stayed
Perhaps in future I will learn to walk tall
Why did I write this I feel like Ive took exerts from othetr writes like a bad case of nostalgia and broken
With this just a nother interpretasion tring to get off this subject not sure on couple of verses
if eveade or stayed would have been better lost intrest half way through
you decide give some tips if like WRITTEN 2012 BY DAVIDSCOTT,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
if ANY OTHER MEMVERS COULD HELP ME WITH THIS LOST MY WAT A BIT WITH IT VERSE 3 AND 4
INSPIERD BY ALL THE COOL POETS ON SOUP
NOTE OTHER WRITES IN THIS PATTERN 1 ATTRIBIUTES 2 KALIDOSCOPE 3 WONDERER
4 IN STILLS 5 WORDS 6 SORROW 7MOODS 8 VITAGE
Copyright © David Scott | Year Posted 2013
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