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My Affinity

I shall live the rest of my life in serenity With beautiful thoughts filling my mind, A desire to love and be loved is my affinity. Some may say this lofty goal an extremity No doubt, some will bitter criticism find, I shall live the rest of my life in serenity. I have never sought the fame of celebrity And, I have no jealousy of that kind, A desire to love and be loved is my affinity. I have found nothing surpasses integrity, While fostering those filial ties that bind I shall live the rest of my life in serenity. Life, I find, comes with a prized amenity When to live the noble life, one is resigned A desire to love and be loved is my affinity. Anything less would be a rank obscenity Present and hereafter could not be aligned, I shall live the rest of my life in serenity A desire to love and be loved is my affinity. written December 17, 2021

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 12/23/2021 1:30:00 AM

Sounds like Nirvana to me; and a villanelle is not easy. So hats off to you!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/23/2021 8:10:00 AM

Thank you, Caren. You are always so kind...I think!

Lin Lane

Date: 12/18/2021 5:22:00 AM

Hi Milt, To live a life of serenity would be Paradise Found. I'm afraid it's not yet to be found, but soon, I hope it will be that way. You composed a wonderful Villanelle.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/18/2021 9:11:00 AM

Lin, I certainly wrote of a utopian life, not yet achieved; however, a great desire. Thanks for your sweet compliment on my Villanelle. I love them and have written quite a few. My favorite formats are the Villanelle, the Triolet, and the Terzanelle. I also enjoy a Terza Rima if the theme calls for it. Thanks so much for your thoughts.