My Sun~~

MY SUN~~~

Like the sun
against the day sky.
Releasing unrestrained light!
Diluting your daily sphere
that repulse
my intellectual needs.
Take Death into my desert
dumping you a side.
Uncrossed boundaries that multiply
concealing your eyes of beauty
from the world.
Never embracing eternity.
Like an atomic emerging
all elements of coincidence
destroying  all
forms of life's way.
The nectar that flows
ruining every thing we dream of.
~~~~
Implanted with 
dilutions of all the ugliness
that refrains 
unmerciful ways
disconnecting
every stop,
conceived in the open.
Slicing through
exposure
that binds devotion
to the negative of dark.
Like the sun
that hits the ground.
Blinding every straight look
with the perception you preach!

By;p.d.
for Nate D. opposite of His (My Moon) poem..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/4/2016 11:19:00 PM
awesome **SKAT**
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Date: 1/20/2014 5:29:00 AM
This is an utterly captivating and lovely piece of writing
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Date: 11/12/2013 11:25:00 AM
oh just love this oldie of yours, Linda,, in fact it just blows me away...
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Date: 1/22/2012 11:28:00 AM
another of yours I've seen. I think i've seen them all, sweetie. btw, on Karen. Yes, she told me she was taking all her poems off about a month ago and she went for it. I told her it was silly to do. I don't know why she was so down on Soup. She didn't like all the drama at the blogs and the mean things people were saying there. I told her it goes on everywhere. No website I know of can police all the plagiarizing going on, etc and btw, I think that is why the Dr. is no longer in the house. Luv , andrea
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Date: 6/22/2011 8:26:00 PM
it is this,,,that we are hungry for,,,,poetry,,,,,,,the light in a darkend world....................great poem.............
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Date: 12/3/2010 5:45:00 AM
PD, I like your poem, My Sun. Good imagery.
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Date: 11/25/2010 8:51:00 PM
only one can feel the burn~best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat
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Date: 11/22/2010 12:19:00 PM
this poem i think like the sun has a great trajectory, as it travels the page, also i enjoyed the ambivalant qualitys of some lines,P D.
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Date: 11/22/2010 10:29:00 AM
P D Wow! What an imagination you have! This is wonderful. Well Done As Always, Shar
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Date: 11/21/2010 11:38:00 PM
+H4nK$ btwZ 4 c0mn+1n6 0n m4H p03MZzzz 333K O_o
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Date: 11/21/2010 11:37:00 PM
What a very effective write this is pd-- & a wonderful complement to Nate's Moon poem-- You sure depict the sun wonderfully here & hoping that sun's heat never extinguishes-- enjoyed the read & ooh wee!! SUper duper thank you for the awesome win-- I am so honored to share 1st place-- haha I had so much fun writing that-- & I even learned to type in jejemon-- b3++eR w4+cHh aW+!! jajajajaja 0H n0! l0oK w4t ur m4k1n6 meeH du! j3j3j3j3 --n1kk0 :D
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Date: 11/21/2010 8:48:00 PM
The poem burns with lovely images pd. Thanks for selecting my poem in your contest. Luv always.
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Date: 11/21/2010 7:11:00 PM
wonderful! very...fiery. thanks for putting my name in your dedication and for stopping by. have a great week :D
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:59:00 PM
Loved it! very...fiery! thank you for stopping by and putting me as one of the poet in your dedication. have a great week destroyer :D
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Date: 11/21/2010 6:25:00 PM
Did I read your blog wrong .. or did u say u were posting a new contest luv? have not seen it yet.. did I goof again? sorry .. been busy spoiling Ron today as he is not feeling well at all luv.. keep me posted OK..don't want to miss any of your great contests P.D. my BFF...your BFF forever...luv..
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Date: 11/21/2010 5:22:00 PM
Very descriptive! I enjoyed reading this one!
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Date: 11/21/2010 10:54:00 AM
cool write' P.J.
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Date: 11/21/2010 7:22:00 AM
Hey Pd! I just loved your creativity and imagery in this one.. Hope your Sunday will be a blessed one ;) Wilma
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Date: 11/21/2010 3:07:00 AM
Thank you for your comment "My last night". And your Poem "My Sun" has strong moving words.
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Date: 11/20/2010 9:58:00 PM
BAck here again, P.D to tell you thanks so much. I just saw that I got a win in your contest. It always makes my day to see a nice win! I'll be sure to read your other winners later. Now it's time for my beddy bye. Well, after I do that dishes piled in my sink!! Have an awesome Sunday. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/20/2010 8:40:00 PM
thankxxx to my BBF P.D. for letting me know this important feature ..luv.. have added it.. good luck in your judging luv.. and Happy Thanksgiving to u and to Nate and to entire families..luv.. your BFF forever and always .. and more ..
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Date: 11/20/2010 3:30:00 PM
another great poem! i like the use of so many different words to create your picture!
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Date: 11/20/2010 12:16:00 PM
That's sound advice PD, hate to be walking around a dept store and walk into a clothes rack because I'm thinking of a couple of smiles. Enjoy your weekend to luv Always Michael
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Date: 11/20/2010 11:05:00 AM
Love the imagery DP.Like the sun that hits the ground. Blinding every straight look with the perception you preach! Your comments are important to me, Agape, Moses
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Date: 11/20/2010 10:52:00 AM
WOW.... ANOTHER DESTROYING INK FROM THE P.D. enjoyed reading this greatly, A sun to brighten my life, my sun. love, lightenin ink.
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