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My Journey Doesn'T End

"My existence journey doesn't end; it's just a beginning to mend." Quote_by Poet Timeless conventional journey, Through a window that returns me; While a curtain of dreams is drawn. As blessed daylight comes in a yawn, Forward motion of flourish love, As favorable seasons shove Yesterday back, while resolving My life, a means of evolving. 3/22/2022 Form J - Just Write Me A New Poem Poetry Contest 3. journey Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 3/26/2022 6:53:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful and I like your quote too ~Constance
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Date: 3/25/2022 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/quote. Love Both. Have a great/blessed day....................
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Date: 3/24/2022 9:50:00 PM
"My life, a means of evolving" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/24/2022 6:25:00 PM
Eve, I love, love, love that quote! Bravo! ~ On the Mend
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2022 7:04:00 PM
Awe, thank you.
Date: 3/23/2022 11:17:00 AM
Your poem is just so deep and beautiful, Eve. Indeed, your last insightful line is potent and a grand finale to an exquisite, expressive rhyme. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2022 7:05:00 PM
You are so inspiring, my friend, thank you. Blessings
Date: 3/22/2022 9:44:00 PM
You know, it's actually very close to being that J form that we could use if we wanted to. Jeuju or whatever it's called. Very nicely done, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/22/2022 9:48:00 PM
I looked up the form and it is 5 or 7 syllable count couplets for Jeuju.
Date: 3/22/2022 11:55:00 AM
Evolving is always better than rotting! Aloha!
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Date: 3/22/2022 9:14:00 AM
Excellent, Eve. Absolutely excellent. And so true.....
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2022 7:05:00 PM
You are so inspiring, Milt, thank you. Blessings
Date: 3/22/2022 2:04:00 AM
No our journey does not stop. Enjoyed your poem.
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Eve Roper
Date: 3/24/2022 7:06:00 PM
My friend, thank you. Blessings

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