My Eternity

~~My Eternity~~
    
Riding my unicorn, it's cold today!
The winds in Arcadia making the 
winds, twist and sway,
But in the distance you beckon me,
To your arms circumference, oh,
so warningly.

I simply can't resist your call or kiss,
So I ride on mainly through a heavy 
thick mist.
To my one eternal love that none can steal.
Oh, yes, oh yes, how divinely, breathless
and intensely,oh, how very real.

Bound by love forever and adrift, 
In a sparkling, starlit, atmospheric bliss.
And our love that never ended, 
But was born of a burning first kiss.
In Arcadia, your Panagiota, yours
now and forever exists.


                4/3/2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 4/4/2023 12:34:00 PM
My Friend This is so enchanting and wondrous on every way possible! I am wrapped in your Unicorn magic! . A Fav for me. Your Forever Friend Chantelle xoxo
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/4/2023 8:17:00 PM
Chantelle…it’s very misty in Arcadia and a sensual Environment, lush forests and flowers. Thank you. Oh, my a Fav! Wow! Nothing like starlit bliss. Woo Hoo.yes, forever friend, Pangie!
Date: 4/4/2023 11:22:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, I sense that you love the unicorn. It is a cute little animal. I can see that you like them. Hugs, /Darlene\ xxx
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/5/2023 4:34:00 AM
Hello Panagiota, Thank you for clearing this up. I always thught it was a smaller horse. A normal Now that makes sense. size horse.Hugs. /Darlene\ xxx
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/4/2023 7:32:00 PM
Actually, no. A unicorn in Arcadia was the size of a horse. I cannot ride a toy! LOL. In the poem, I am not in love with the unicorn. The unicorn takes me to my love in the distance, sorry, if I confused you! Sorry.. Love Pamagiota xxoo
Date: 4/3/2023 8:35:00 PM
This is so sweet, yet so brave and bold, Pangie. Seems you're finding a new version of yourself in these kind of writes, tempering the wild filly with the wise woman who has experienced the vicissitudes of the world and woven them into a far-seeing philosophy. Bravo, Gershon
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/4/2023 5:25:00 AM
I am? This has alaways been me, just sold out to run the race here, so to speak. I love the depth of your response..it gives we more insight into myself, I do not like the title though. Let me know of some alternatives,plplease. Good luck on election day. Yikes! Gratefully,Panagiota xx
Date: 4/3/2023 7:04:00 PM
Pangie, that first line.....it just got me...the hook was set....Nicely done
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/3/2023 7:12:00 PM
Wow, John! Your comment put a wonderful arrow in my heart and filled me with joy! Sometimes, many times, I think of quitting writing for various reasons. You gave me a boost that I really needed today. I am one grateful poet.now! Many, many thanks Hugs, Pangie.xo
Date: 4/3/2023 4:53:00 PM
Beautiful poem , love the flow through your words: )
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/3/2023 6:00:00 PM
Thank you, Stephan! Your kind words encourage this humble poetess. Blessings, Panagiota
Date: 4/3/2023 1:36:00 PM
- A lovely and romantic poem, Pangie :) - hugs
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Panagiota Romios
Date: 4/3/2023 1:51:00 PM
Good afternoon from the USA! Thank you for your charming comment! Love, Pangie
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