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My Dearest Love - the Cinquain Style

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~My Dearest Love ~ ( Cinquain Suite ) For you My love grows more With heart so full of love While dreaming of you always 'neath Moon stars So soft Your love just comes Like a breath of fresh air I feel your presence inside me Day night You are My shining star My only one true love My love for you will always shine So true My sweet Love I love you So and very much more For you my loves forever and Ever. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2017 July.21.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~Author's Notes: The " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

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Faraz Ajmal

Date: 8/20/2017 8:50:00 AM

Such a beautiful written poem on love, may your love remain eternal and both of you remain happy for the rest of your life and I truly wish from the heart that your partner love you the same you love him, and your love toward him is clear in this poem, a very beautiful write

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/24/2017 4:16:00 AM

Wow Dorian, congratulations on POTD! Just Divine! : )

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/24/2017 7:46:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Connie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)Thanks for the POTD congrats too!I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 7/24/2017 12:19:00 AM

A wonderful work with a soft flow of words. Congrats on POTD :) Sunita

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/24/2017 7:46:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Sunita, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)Thanks for the POTD congrats too!I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Akkina Downing

Date: 7/23/2017 6:43:00 PM

Congrats Dorian on your beautiful potd :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/24/2017 7:45:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Akkina, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)Thanks for the POTD congrats too!I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Eve Roper

Date: 7/23/2017 5:34:00 PM

love the spiritual meaning, Dorian, congratulations on POTD

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/24/2017 7:44:00 AM

Thank you ever so kindly Eve, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)Thanks for the POTD congrats too!I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/23/2017 4:07:00 PM

Hello D!! Best Congratulations to you on the POTD honor for your marvelous Cinquain: "My Dearest Love"!!! I already commented earlier to you on this fabulously articulated poem. I'm very pleased to see it was chosen for POTD which is a testament to the very high quality of all of your work!! Warmest Regards from Ingrid and me!! Best, G!! P.S. Spill Ink!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/24/2017 7:38:00 AM

Hi there again G!:)) Wow!Thank you so much again and again my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by again to comment and congratulate me so beautifully here on P.O.T.D. I deeply appreciate this and everything ,G :)).You're too kind!Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid:)Take good care of each other now n' always ,G:)My warmest regards to you n' Ingrid too! Spill ink!:))Keep in touch!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/23/2017 11:57:00 AM

- So beautifully written, Dorian - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/23/2017 3:29:00 PM

Hi there Anne - Lise!:))Thank you ever so kindly, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem.You're so kind.I deeply appreciate it all my very dear friend.Sending you always my love n' prayers:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/23/2017 9:19:00 AM

Hi Dorian, I love cinquains and I adore this one greatly. An absolute stunning piece. Congratulations for POTD honors :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/23/2017 3:25:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Susan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)You're so kind.I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Joseph May

Date: 7/23/2017 9:14:00 AM

Beautiful write Dorian...Congrats on POTD

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/23/2017 3:24:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Joseph, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/23/2017 8:54:00 AM

Congratulations Dorian for POTD honors...

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/23/2017 3:23:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Charlie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Maria Williams

Date: 7/23/2017 7:28:00 AM

Congratulations on your POTD. I am not familiar with this style, but your poetic words speak for themselves. Just lovely Dorian...Maria

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/23/2017 3:19:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Maria, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem written in this particular Cinquain style:)I deeply appreciated it all!So happy that you liked it:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Gary Bateman

Date: 7/22/2017 9:27:00 AM

Hello D!! Another one of your exquisite Cinquain style masterpieces. No one writes these like you do. (I noticed too the wondrous syncopation of the each of the stanzas, with the words of each opening and closing verse in each stanza.) Your writes "D" always have such perfect balance and symmetry as the true professional you are. I can only add, a TR/FAVE in my book!! Spill Ink!! Best Weekend Wishes from Ingrid and me!! G!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 7/23/2017 5:47:00 AM

Hi G!:))Thank you ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem. I deeply appreciate it all,G :))You're always very kind to me !I'm so glad you liked this one. I truly hope that all is well for you n' Ingrid .Sending always my love n' prayers to you both!:)Take very good care of each other now n' always ,G:)Best wishes to you n' Ingrid in all too! Spill ink!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.