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My Dearest Love - the Cinquain Style

~My  Dearest   Love ~
( Cinquain  Suite )



For you 
My  love  grows more
With  heart  so full  of  love
While dreaming  of you always 'neath
Moon  stars

So  soft
Your  love just  comes
Like  a  breath  of   fresh  air
I  feel  your presence inside  me
Day  night

You  are
My  shining  star
My  only one true  love
My love  for you will  always shine
So  true

My  sweet
Love  I   love you
So  and  very much  more 
For you my loves  forever and
Ever.



Dorian  Petersen  Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017


July.21.2017



“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 


~Author's Notes:

The  " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

Copyright © Dorian Petersen Potter | Year Posted 2017

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Faraz Ajmal Date: 8/20/2017 8:50:00 AM Such a beautiful written poem on love, may your love remain eternal and both of you remain happy for the rest of your life and I truly wish from the heart that your partner love you the same you love him, and your love toward him is clear in this poem, a very beautiful write Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 7/24/2017 4:16:00 AM Wow Dorian, congratulations on POTD! Just Divine! : ) Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/24/2017 7:46:00 AM Thank you ever so kindly Connie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)Thanks for the POTD congrats too!I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Sunita U.D Palawon Date: 7/24/2017 12:19:00 AM A wonderful work with a soft flow of words. Congrats on POTD :) Sunita Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/24/2017 7:46:00 AM Thank you ever so kindly Sunita, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)Thanks for the POTD congrats too!I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Akkina Downing Date: 7/23/2017 6:43:00 PM Congrats Dorian on your beautiful potd :) Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/24/2017 7:45:00 AM Thank you ever so kindly Akkina, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)Thanks for the POTD congrats too!I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Eve Roper Date: 7/23/2017 5:34:00 PM love the spiritual meaning, Dorian, congratulations on POTD Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/24/2017 7:44:00 AM Thank you ever so kindly Eve, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)Thanks for the POTD congrats too!I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Gary Bateman Date: 7/23/2017 4:07:00 PM Hello D!! Best Congratulations to you on the POTD honor for your marvelous Cinquain: "My Dearest Love"!!! I already commented earlier to you on this fabulously articulated poem. I'm very pleased to see it was chosen for POTD which is a testament to the very high quality of all of your work!! Warmest Regards from Ingrid and me!! Best, G!! P.S. Spill Ink!! Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/24/2017 7:38:00 AM Hi there again G!:)) Wow!Thank you so much again and again my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by again to comment and congratulate me so beautifully here on P.O.T.D. I deeply appreciate this and everything ,G :)).You're too kind!Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid:)Take good care of each other now n' always ,G:)My warmest regards to you n' Ingrid too! Spill ink!:))Keep in touch!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/23/2017 11:57:00 AM - So beautifully written, Dorian - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/23/2017 3:29:00 PM Hi there Anne - Lise!:))Thank you ever so kindly, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem.You're so kind.I deeply appreciate it all my very dear friend.Sending you always my love n' prayers:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D

Susan Ashley Date: 7/23/2017 9:19:00 AM Hi Dorian, I love cinquains and I adore this one greatly. An absolute stunning piece. Congratulations for POTD honors :) Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/23/2017 3:25:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Susan, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)You're so kind.I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Joseph May Date: 7/23/2017 9:14:00 AM Beautiful write Dorian...Congrats on POTD Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/23/2017 3:24:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Joseph, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Charlie Smith Date: 7/23/2017 8:54:00 AM Congratulations Dorian for POTD honors... Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/23/2017 3:23:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Charlie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem:)I deeply appreciated all!Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Maria Williams Date: 7/23/2017 7:28:00 AM Congratulations on your POTD. I am not familiar with this style, but your poetic words speak for themselves. Just lovely Dorian...Maria Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/23/2017 3:19:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Maria, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem written in this particular Cinquain style:)I deeply appreciated it all!So happy that you liked it:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))D

Gary Bateman Date: 7/22/2017 9:27:00 AM Hello D!! Another one of your exquisite Cinquain style masterpieces. No one writes these like you do. (I noticed too the wondrous syncopation of the each of the stanzas, with the words of each opening and closing verse in each stanza.) Your writes "D" always have such perfect balance and symmetry as the true professional you are. I can only add, a TR/FAVE in my book!! Spill Ink!! Best Weekend Wishes from Ingrid and me!! G!! Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 7/23/2017 5:47:00 AM Hi G!:))Thank you ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my Cinquain love poem. I deeply appreciate it all,G :))You're always very kind to me !I'm so glad you liked this one. I truly hope that all is well for you n' Ingrid .Sending always my love n' prayers to you both!:)Take very good care of each other now n' always ,G:)Best wishes to you n' Ingrid in all too! Spill ink!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.