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My Sweet Love - the Cinquain Style

~My  Sweet  Love ~
( Cinquain  Garland )


My love
You're  my  sweet dream
My one, only true love
The one I love  forever and
Always

For you
My love grows more
With heart so full  of  love
While dreaming of you always 'neath
Moon, stars

Your love
Is a candlelight
That just never goes out
With true love I follow always
Your  light

Love you're
So beautiful
In your heart, soul, see love
And always,  forever I do 
Love you.


Dorian  Petersen  Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2017


June.09.2017



“Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” 
- Mark Twain- 


~Author's Notes:

The  " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

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Gary Bateman Date: 6/16/2017 12:17:00 PM Hello "D" -- Congratulation on the POTD honor. My original comments below are confirmed now more than ever. This Cinquain is superb and marvelous in every respect!! Best Wishes for the Weekend from Ingrid and me!! "G" Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/17/2017 1:58:00 PM Hi G!:))Thank you so much ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by n' commenting so beautifully on my love poem. And for coming back to congratulate for having it chosen Poem Of The Day!:))I deeply appreciate you, and on this and for all your kind visits, and very awesome comments you always leave me behind when(I feel very humbled and honored by it all)you visit my pages.You're always very kind to me,G!:))Thanks so much for your true, great friendship, loyal support and all:) I really hope that all is well for you and Ingrid and with your ongoing book as well .Looking forward to reading this one too when you release it.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always:)Take very good care of each other always,G.Best wishes to you both! Spill ink!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))D.

Leon Enriquez Date: 6/11/2017 5:27:00 PM Dear Dorian: Well said. Congratulations on your write being selected for the Poem of the Day! Trust you are keeping well my friend. All the best then, Leon. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/11/2017 7:27:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Leon, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for your wonderful congrats to me for Poem of the Day!:)Deeply appreciated all :))All the best to you too!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Freddie Robinson Jr. Date: 6/11/2017 2:03:00 PM Very romantic cool Cinquain, Dorian. Kudos for POTD. Beautiful poem. Love always. Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/11/2017 4:47:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Freddie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for your wonderful congrats to me on POTD!:)Deeply appreciated all :))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Charlie Smith Date: 6/11/2017 11:24:00 AM Congratulations Dorian for POTD honors... Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/11/2017 4:46:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Charlie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for your wonderful congrats to me on POTD!:)Deeply appreciated all :))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Joseph May Date: 6/11/2017 8:45:00 AM Beautiful Cinquain Dorian..Congrats on Poem of the Day... Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/11/2017 4:45:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly Joseph, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for your wonderful congrats to me on POTD!:)Deeply appreciated all :))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2017 4:49:00 AM - Beautiful, Dorian :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/11/2017 4:38:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem and thanks too for your congrats on POTD!(I just found out about this just a little while ago:)Deeply appreciate it all dear friend.Sending you always my love n' prayers:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)) Hugs!D

Gary Bateman Date: 6/10/2017 5:18:00 PM Hello D!! Another radiant and most beautiful Cinquain style poem on such a dreamy and romantic subject: Love!! I always enjoy your various writes very much and the picture images you post as well. The only other thing I will add is: THIS ONE'S A FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Best Wishes from Ingrid and me. G!! Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/11/2017 4:28:00 PM Hi G!:)Thank you so much ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by n' commenting so beautifully on my love poem here.I'm so glad that you like this one :))I deeply appreciate you and all your kind visits, and the very awesome comments, and all that you always leave me behind when you visit my pages.You're always so very kind to me,G!:))Thanks so much for your true, great friendship, support and all:) I hope all is well for you and Ingrid and with your new book .Looking forward to reading this one too.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always.Take very good care of each other forever,okay,G.Spill ink!Best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.

Faraz Ajmal Date: 6/10/2017 1:48:00 PM A very beautiful written poem, I m really happy for you that yo ve find your love and really wish you best of luck with him/her and really hope you two remain happy with each other all your life however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them Login to Reply Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 6/10/2017 3:52:00 PM Thank you ever so kindly, Faraz, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem:))Deeply appreciated all. And yes, I'll visit your pages very soon, but meanwhile, just let me welcome you to the site and I truly hope that you enjoy your stay with us for a long time:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D