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My Sweet Love - the Cinquain Style

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~My Sweet Love ~ ( Cinquain Garland ) My love You're my sweet dream My one, only true love The one I love forever and Always For you My love grows more With heart so full of love While dreaming of you always 'neath Moon, stars Your love Is a candlelight That just never goes out With true love I follow always Your light Love you're So beautiful In your heart, soul, see love And always, forever I do Love you. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2017 June.09.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~Author's Notes: The " Cinquain " is a poetry form or style developed by the Imagist poet, Adelaide Crapsey.

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Gary Bateman

Date: 6/16/2017 12:17:00 PM

Hello "D" -- Congratulation on the POTD honor. My original comments below are confirmed now more than ever. This Cinquain is superb and marvelous in every respect!! Best Wishes for the Weekend from Ingrid and me!! "G"

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/17/2017 1:58:00 PM

Hi G!:))Thank you so much ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by n' commenting so beautifully on my love poem. And for coming back to congratulate for having it chosen Poem Of The Day!:))I deeply appreciate you, and on this and for all your kind visits, and very awesome comments you always leave me behind when(I feel very humbled and honored by it all)you visit my pages.You're always very kind to me,G!:))Thanks so much for your true, great friendship, loyal support and all:) I really hope that all is well for you and Ingrid and with your ongoing book as well .Looking forward to reading this one too when you release it.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always:)Take very good care of each other always,G.Best wishes to you both! Spill ink!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:))D.

Leon Enriquez

Date: 6/11/2017 5:27:00 PM

Dear Dorian: Well said. Congratulations on your write being selected for the Poem of the Day! Trust you are keeping well my friend. All the best then, Leon.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/11/2017 7:27:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Leon, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for your wonderful congrats to me for Poem of the Day!:)Deeply appreciated all :))All the best to you too!:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/11/2017 2:03:00 PM

Very romantic cool Cinquain, Dorian. Kudos for POTD. Beautiful poem. Love always.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/11/2017 4:47:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Freddie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for your wonderful congrats to me on POTD!:)Deeply appreciated all :))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Charlie Smith

Date: 6/11/2017 11:24:00 AM

Congratulations Dorian for POTD honors...

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/11/2017 4:46:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Charlie, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for your wonderful congrats to me on POTD!:)Deeply appreciated all :))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Joseph May

Date: 6/11/2017 8:45:00 AM

Beautiful Cinquain Dorian..Congrats on Poem of the Day...

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/11/2017 4:45:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly Joseph, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem.And for your wonderful congrats to me on POTD!:)Deeply appreciated all :))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/11/2017 4:49:00 AM

- Beautiful, Dorian :) - Congratulations on yours p.o.t.d. !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/11/2017 4:38:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem and thanks too for your congrats on POTD!(I just found out about this just a little while ago:)Deeply appreciate it all dear friend.Sending you always my love n' prayers:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)) Hugs!D

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/10/2017 5:18:00 PM

Hello D!! Another radiant and most beautiful Cinquain style poem on such a dreamy and romantic subject: Love!! I always enjoy your various writes very much and the picture images you post as well. The only other thing I will add is: THIS ONE'S A FAVE IN MY BOOK!! Best Wishes from Ingrid and me. G!!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/11/2017 4:28:00 PM

Hi G!:)Thank you so much ever so kindly my very dear friend Gary,for stopping by n' commenting so beautifully on my love poem here.I'm so glad that you like this one :))I deeply appreciate you and all your kind visits, and the very awesome comments, and all that you always leave me behind when you visit my pages.You're always so very kind to me,G!:))Thanks so much for your true, great friendship, support and all:) I hope all is well for you and Ingrid and with your new book .Looking forward to reading this one too.Sending my love n' prayers to you and Ingrid as always.Take very good care of each other forever,okay,G.Spill ink!Best to you always!Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))D.

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/10/2017 1:48:00 PM

A very beautiful written poem, I m really happy for you that yo ve find your love and really wish you best of luck with him/her and really hope you two remain happy with each other all your life however I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 6/10/2017 3:52:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Faraz, for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my love poem:))Deeply appreciated all. And yes, I'll visit your pages very soon, but meanwhile, just let me welcome you to the site and I truly hope that you enjoy your stay with us for a long time:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:)D