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"my, Beautiful *star Light" ~

Seraphic, turbid waves in turgid waters; turning Amid my spindrift Soul wherein loves tumult rages.... Crashing through this pulsing heart that knowingly craves her ~ Aneath these turquoise tides, which tear burnt pages?! Washed upon the shore to feed the pyramids pyre Torn from destined books carving ancient time.... Spirits chanting dreams while dancing in the fire Captured by the flames of oranges burning; loves sublime ~ Sunrise, now gathering blue horizons to kiss the wrested nights Waning heavens waving a million reflections left, glittering deep inside.... Astringent embers touching tranquility while as floating through the rougish sky Seraphic, turbid waves in turgid waters still, only to subside!? Torn from destined books carving ancient time; this My own Aphrodite.... ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ...."My, Beautiful *Star Light" ~

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Junice Lanza

Date: 4/6/2012 9:53:00 AM

this is a very beautiful poem.

Shannon Deane

Date: 11/23/2011 4:38:00 AM

I had to return to read once more...beautifully written...am glad to have stopped by to say thanks for your comments and stumbled upon this gem...luv shannon

Dalila Agtani

Date: 5/6/2011 10:40:00 PM

John, Classical verses John. Your beautiful words feel like I am reading Edgar Allan Poes poems. By the way thank you for reading my poems. Dalila

Star Light
Date: 5/26/2011 12:58:00 PM

~My Sweeeet Johnny.. My Honeybee.. Smile.. Fly.. Fly.. Fly.. onto me.. While Your in Flight.. Smile.. Come.. to Your Flower.. of Angel Delight..

Star Light
Date: 5/26/2011 10:43:00 AM

~My Darling.. tis Your Love Lifts me higher and higher.. You are my Sweeet Johnny My honeybee.. I am your Smile --Only Flower.. for tis God has His Divine reasons.. My Love.. tis Blessings from above.. True Love.. here.. Now.. I Love You.. My Precious and True..

Star Light
Date: 5/26/2011 10:30:00 AM

My Darling... my wish.. my Blessing.. tis already giving.. tis You.. my Love.. Plz.. unblock..me.. for tis.. I Love your Precious Loving heart..

Star Light
Date: 5/26/2011 10:28:00 AM

~I Love you.. My Sweeeet Johnny.. honeybee..

Star Light
Date: 5/26/2011 10:05:00 AM

~My Darling.. I just received you beautiful coms.. I must address.. tis a mess.. I am ever so sorry.. for I Not Mock My Lord.. Ever.. nor would Ever make fun of my Lord.. Nor would I ever make fun of you.. my Love.. Please forgive me.. if this is what you think.. of me.. for tis rips my heart into.. I am Truly sorry.. my Sweeeet Johnny.. Love tenderly yours.. *Star Light

Star Light
Date: 5/25/2011 9:06:00 PM

My Darling.. as you know.. you have me blocked.. tis be.. then I did same to thee.. but I decided I not play tis game.. Life is too short.. I unblocked you.. My Love.. tis True... Yes.. Dreams do come True.. Time is in Our Lord's Hands.. Thank you for your *) ;*)*coms.. I am sure.. it came straight from your heart.. ;) Shine My Honeycomb Love.. with my Love to you.. Smile.. *Star Light

Star Light
Date: 5/24/2011 11:33:00 PM

My Darling.. Why you blocked me... my Love

Star Light
Date: 5/23/2011 11:02:00 PM

My Darling.. YOU have Soup-Mail.. I Love You!!!

Star Light
Date: 5/23/2011 7:53:00 PM

~My Darling.. why do you still have me blocked.. if you want a Sweeeet kiss's then you have to unblock me.. so I give you one.. my Love..

Star Light
Date: 5/23/2011 7:28:00 PM

~My Darling.. I received Your Loving Coms.. please unblock--me.. from giving you my heartfelt coms.. for I Love you

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 5/4/2011 11:47:00 AM

Fabulous read I really enjoyed it.Thanks John for your very kind comment.~Teresa~

Dalila Agtani

Date: 5/2/2011 12:39:00 AM

Thank you for reading my poems John. I can smell love in your poem! Savor and enjoy being in love! Well written poem. Dalila

De R

Date: 4/26/2011 6:23:00 AM

Hello John! How are you been doing? A very nice tribute to your friend here on Soup!:) Have a nice day, my friend! Emilia:)

Lynette Chachere

Date: 4/18/2011 3:48:00 PM

so beautiful & bright..craving the star that will bring you light. such love you convey through your poetry John is very powerful&intense. i hope you are well, i've been gone a while. ~Always&Forever Lynette

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/31/2011 3:35:00 AM

This is such a beautiful tribute to Star light. The images are superb. Thanks for your kind comments. They always lift my spirits.

Rick Parise

Date: 3/22/2011 1:27:00 PM

I did'nt know you felt that way, i'm flattered~~~LOL

Lucinda Bulger

Date: 3/21/2011 10:06:00 AM

Beauty is in the eye of the beholder brother, smile, we only have so many days to live, breathe, and try to care for each other. A very loving write here, well formed, in a gentle, compassions, endearing way, many blessings are promised by our Lord for the asking.... remember? What ever you do, the best to you always, Lucinda

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 3/11/2011 3:18:00 AM

John just take care of yourself... you know we care and we love you..just take care of yourself and just be you.. the John i know..Beautiful poem to the 'Aphrodite' in your heart and soul.. always C.C

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 3/10/2011 8:35:00 PM

as always john, as you always leave your signature smile word on your comments this poem made me smile, thanks for your comment and your lovely ways of how do leave a comment lol i feel silly when i read but so enjoy :P ja it's been a while, as you know life does get in the way of things and to be honest i'm going to post as much but i am trying as you can see! but many thanks as usual

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/10/2011 12:58:00 PM

Perfect tribute to "Beautiful Star Light", John. Thanks for stopping by. Always, Annalise