Muted Chatter

He walked solemnly toward the green door,
dirty water covered the floor,
stench of burnt skin in the air,
greeted by a priest with gray hair,
but he still showed no fear,
a mix crowd of men and women came to watch him die,
he had no care,
as their faces filled with tears, 
and his death may regain their lives,
briefly,
as hatred becomes despair,
in their minds, they thought of the nails
he hammered into his victims’ skull,
and they thought that the system fails,
but after they prayed,
the guilty verdict stayed,
a muted chatter filled the small room,
switch on during the afternoon,
and a quick end emptied the gloom.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 2/24/2009 6:59:00 AM
I HATE that poem. You my dear are ripe n rotten
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Date: 2/10/2009 6:36:00 AM
a well written piece ~ Arany
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Date: 2/9/2009 9:03:00 PM
lots of imagery. love the write, very well penned
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Date: 2/9/2009 7:17:00 AM
Very dark write my friend.. Love the story aspect of the piece.. you can tell a story very well.
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Date: 2/9/2009 7:16:00 AM
Oh my macabre little man as soon as I saw the dirty water I knew you were running amuck in the recesses of your mind. What I don't understand is why you crack me up. I sit totally creeped out until finished then usually laugh out loud. On the other hand I am very analytical and I wonder about things like were they dead before he started nailing through their skulls? You know it would be very difficult to hold a head still wouldn't you agree?
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Date: 2/9/2009 7:16:00 AM
Oh and by the way the comment you left on my poem you are such a twerp! Laurie
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Date: 2/9/2009 6:46:00 AM
I shudder to think...but he evidently got what he deserved. Good write
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