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Mustard Seed (Part 2)

And here we  receive his hugs and
      groping
grasps,
We are    here
      standing around,
      waiting –
      now used to the spectacle
      and we are
      ignoring him. 

      Now a woman
wearing scrubs and
      a flowered white shirt
                  notices.
                  She approaches
      the group and
      says to us: “Morning,”
      and to him: “Come on,”
      and she pulls his hand away
      and leads him to an adjacent building
through a door
made of bars
with a wrinkled paper sign
that reads
“Please Keep Door Closed”.
The yellow paint on the outer walls
fades at the top
in dripping cement streaks;
the roof is topped by
      ominous
weedy
sticks
of rebar,
      their placement
      apparently haphazard,
      their meaning
      and
      purpose obscured,
crookedly  pointing
      upward
toward the
      clouded
      sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/24/2008 12:52:00 PM
Wow great job - welcome to the soup - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/24/2008 1:46:00 AM
Ah, the finish is even better. Really felt the emotion and saw this place in my mind's eye. Beautiful write!
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