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Mustard Seed (Part 2)

And here we receive his hugs and groping grasps, We are here standing around, waiting – now used to the spectacle and we are ignoring him. Now a woman wearing scrubs and a flowered white shirt notices. She approaches the group and says to us: “Morning,” and to him: “Come on,” and she pulls his hand away and leads him to an adjacent building through a door made of bars with a wrinkled paper sign that reads “Please Keep Door Closed”. The yellow paint on the outer walls fades at the top in dripping cement streaks; the roof is topped by ominous weedy sticks of rebar, their placement apparently haphazard, their meaning and purpose obscured, crookedly pointing upward toward the clouded sky.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/24/2008 12:52:00 PM
Wow great job - welcome to the soup - Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/24/2008 1:46:00 AM
Ah, the finish is even better. Really felt the emotion and saw this place in my mind's eye. Beautiful write!
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