Suzanne Delaney Poet Free verse

Mustangs

Coats of shimmering autumn,
pied shadows, blinding snow
Time and mist have scribbled fear
into the sinews

LIBERUM Divisa 3 Poetry Contest 
Gregory R Barden 
Tuesday Dec it’s 2020


Original poem
Winged Steeds of Mist
https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/winged_steeds_of_mist_933961

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Kim Rodrigues April 4, 2025 at 11:53 AM Ooh so cool! This one is palpable, felt!

Jennifer Fenn February 18, 2021 at 4:53 PM Wow Suzanne! Now I want to read the original.

Constance La France February 18, 2021 at 2:09 PM Suzanne, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar February 17, 2021 at 9:25 PM Oh wow such great imagery dear Suzanne. Congrats on your win. Hugs ~ Ani

Beata Agustin February 17, 2021 at 8:35 PM Wow! Congrats! Delightfully picturesque. God bless you.

Newton Ranaweera February 17, 2021 at 9:46 AM Congratulations, Suzanne, on your top win for this lovely piece!!

JC Brul February 17, 2021 at 6:55 AM So beautiful Suzanne! Congratulations!! Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 9:00 AM Thanks JCB: I appreciate you for reading and commenting. SuZ

Sara Kendrick February 17, 2021 at 6:49 AM Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 8:59 AM Always great to see you, Sara: Thanks for your nice comments. SuZ

Line Gauthier February 17, 2021 at 6:40 AM beautiful, Suzanne ~ congrats Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 8:58 AM Dear Line: Thankyou always for being so encouraging. SuZ

Linda Alice Fowler February 17, 2021 at 6:09 AM Nicely penned Suzanne :) Congratulations on the win! Linda Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 8:58 AM Many thanks Linda: So glad you enjoyed it. SuZ

Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 5:00 AM This reads like a piece of art! Congratulations, Suzanne! Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 8:57 AM Lovely to hear from you, Kíkí: Appreciate your visit, always. SuZ

Carol Mitra February 17, 2021 at 4:53 AM Really nice....Congrats on your win :) Suzanne Delaney February 17, 2021 at 8:56 AM Thanks so much, Carol: A nice surprise this morning. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich January 4, 2021 at 2:32 PM wow, this is fantastic, even just this stanza of it. Hope you get a win!

Harry Horsman December 27, 2020 at 10:58 PM Wonderful stand alone verse, SuZ,,All the best for the new year...it will get better...

Joseph May December 14, 2020 at 5:10 AM Beautiful verse Suzanne, best wishes

Heidi Sands December 13, 2020 at 5:35 PM Very nice. Well done :) Suzanne Delaney December 13, 2020 at 5:56 PM Thanks Heidi.

Paul Callus December 10, 2020 at 11:23 AM These four lines are enough to tempt me to go read the original poem, Suz....on my way:) Warm regards // paul Suzanne Delaney December 13, 2020 at 5:55 PM Thanks Paul: The beauty of horses inspires me. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux December 10, 2020 at 6:09 AM Now I’m curious about the original. Off to check it out. Suzanne Delaney December 13, 2020 at 5:51 PM Hi Rich: Great to see you. Thanks for your kind words and for reading the original. Best, SuZ

Geoffrey Brewer December 5, 2020 at 4:16 AM Striking, vivid image beautifully described. Suzanne Delaney December 13, 2020 at 5:53 PM Thanks Geoffrey. Most appreciated. SuZ

Jennifer Fenn December 4, 2020 at 7:25 PM Beautiful way to describe wild horses! Suzanne Delaney December 13, 2020 at 5:54 PM Thanks Jen.

Silent One December 2, 2020 at 12:55 PM Horses was my first thought. I was going to say stallions lol ..I should go with my instinct! Suzanne Delaney December 2, 2020 at 1:04 PM The original poem explains it better. Winged Steeds of Mist. Cheers, SuZ

Silent One December 2, 2020 at 9:02 AM Four interesting lines.. I wonder if it s about a car.. Suzanne Delaney December 2, 2020 at 12:35 PM Ha ha SI: You do know that wild horses are called Mustangs....right???

Vijay Pandit December 2, 2020 at 4:35 AM Great imagery unfolds in your lines, SuZ. Suzanne Delaney December 2, 2020 at 12:34 PM Thanks for visiting, Vijay: Always appreciate your coming by. SuZ

Tom Cunningham December 1, 2020 at 9:32 AM Lot of imagery in four lines Suz, a poem in its own right. Good luck in the contest. Tom Suzanne Delaney December 2, 2020 at 2:48 AM Thanks for the encouragement Tom: Always happy to hear from you. Best, SuZ