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Coats of shimmering autumn, pied shadows, blinding snow Time and mist have scribbled fear into the sinews LIBERUM Divisa 3 Poetry Contest Gregory R Barden Tuesday Dec it’s 2020 Original poem Winged Steeds of Mist https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/winged_steeds_of_mist_933961

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Jennifer Fenn

Date: 2/18/2021 4:53:00 PM

Wow Suzanne! Now I want to read the original.

Constance La France

Date: 2/18/2021 2:09:00 PM

Suzanne, congratulations on your win in Gregory's contest with this wonderful four lines _Constance

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 2/17/2021 9:25:00 PM

Oh wow such great imagery dear Suzanne. Congrats on your win. Hugs ~ Ani

Beata Agustin

Date: 2/17/2021 8:35:00 PM

Wow! Congrats! Delightfully picturesque. God bless you.

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 2/17/2021 9:46:00 AM

Congratulations, Suzanne, on your top win for this lovely piece!!

Jcb Brul

Date: 2/17/2021 6:55:00 AM

So beautiful Suzanne! Congratulations!!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/17/2021 9:00:00 AM

Thanks JCB: I appreciate you for reading and commenting. SuZ

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/17/2021 6:49:00 AM

Congrats on this winner. Way to go. Sara

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/17/2021 8:59:00 AM

Always great to see you, Sara: Thanks for your nice comments. SuZ

Line Gauthier

Date: 2/17/2021 6:40:00 AM

beautiful, Suzanne ~ congrats

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/17/2021 8:58:00 AM

Dear Line: Thankyou always for being so encouraging. SuZ

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 2/17/2021 6:09:00 AM

Nicely penned Suzanne :) Congratulations on the win! Linda

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/17/2021 8:58:00 AM

Many thanks Linda: So glad you enjoyed it. SuZ

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/17/2021 5:00:00 AM

This reads like a piece of art! Congratulations, Suzanne!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/17/2021 8:57:00 AM

Lovely to hear from you, Kíkí: Appreciate your visit, always. SuZ

Carol Mitra

Date: 2/17/2021 4:53:00 AM

Really nice....Congrats on your win :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 2/17/2021 8:56:00 AM

Thanks so much, Carol: A nice surprise this morning. SuZ

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/4/2021 2:32:00 PM

wow, this is fantastic, even just this stanza of it. Hope you get a win!

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/27/2020 10:58:00 PM

Wonderful stand alone verse, SuZ,,All the best for the new year...it will get better...

Joseph May

Date: 12/14/2020 5:10:00 AM

Beautiful verse Suzanne, best wishes

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/13/2020 5:35:00 PM

Very nice. Well done :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/13/2020 5:56:00 PM

Thanks Heidi.

Paul Callus

Date: 12/10/2020 11:23:00 AM

These four lines are enough to tempt me to go read the original poem, Suz....on my way:) Warm regards // paul

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/13/2020 5:55:00 PM

Thanks Paul: The beauty of horses inspires me. SuZ

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/10/2020 6:09:00 AM

Now I’m curious about the original. Off to check it out.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/13/2020 5:51:00 PM

Hi Rich: Great to see you. Thanks for your kind words and for reading the original. Best, SuZ

Geoffrey Brewer

Date: 12/5/2020 4:16:00 AM

Striking, vivid image beautifully described.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/13/2020 5:53:00 PM

Thanks Geoffrey. Most appreciated. SuZ

Jennifer Fenn

Date: 12/4/2020 7:25:00 PM

Beautiful way to describe wild horses!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/13/2020 5:54:00 PM

Thanks Jen.

Silent One

Date: 12/2/2020 12:55:00 PM

Horses was my first thought. I was going to say stallions lol ..I should go with my instinct!

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/2/2020 1:04:00 PM

The original poem explains it better. Winged Steeds of Mist. Cheers, SuZ

Silent One

Date: 12/2/2020 9:02:00 AM

Four interesting lines.. I wonder if it s about a car..

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/2/2020 12:35:00 PM

Ha ha SI: You do know that wild horses are called Mustangs....right???

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/2/2020 4:35:00 AM

Great imagery unfolds in your lines, SuZ.

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/2/2020 12:34:00 PM

Thanks for visiting, Vijay: Always appreciate your coming by. SuZ

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/1/2020 9:32:00 AM

Lot of imagery in four lines Suz, a poem in its own right. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 12/2/2020 2:48:00 AM

Thanks for the encouragement Tom: Always happy to hear from you. Best, SuZ