Musk Smells Coming

Musk smells coming



                                        Musk smells coming
                                     From Andromeda's navel
                                       Blue moon is drifting
                                       Everything unearthly
                                    The shadow embraces me
                                      Soft breasts steely ****
                                        Squeezy little imps.



                                       And bed of darkness
                                           Yellow carpet
                                Velvet sheets fingers wiggling
                                          My body aches
                                     In voluptuous climbing
                                          Earth crumbles
                                              To shreds.


                                  Now the body releases soul
                                       Dead nerves skittle
                                         And her lips melt
                                     In the first morning sun
                                            




Hotsy Totsy - Poetry Contest
Sponsor	Rachel Firmin
15 February, 2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/16/2015 7:31:00 AM

Hmmmn...deeply sensuous and languorous. Still, there's a touch of humor..."squeezy little imps"!. As always, you have a unique style all your own, Rajat my friend. More smiles from the land of thousand isles... :) Kim

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/15/2015 11:27:00 AM

Very deep pen Rajat! Very raw and powerful piece, my dearest friend. GL in the contest! A 7 from me! In his light! God bless you! I wish you a very lovely day! :) xxx D" Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/15/2015 11:10:00 AM

- wooow, Rajat - really deep and well written - I wish you best of luck in contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)