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October .10.2023
Musings on Faith Poetry Contest
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When I feel puzzled and perplexed, When in the maze of conflicting thoughts, I am held, Wondering how to proceed and reach the port, Then Faith in God comes handy to my aid Over the turbulent waves, as I get tossed, The promise of His Word gives me courage. His everlasting love, I feel in my heart. On my scars it serves as a safe bandage All I pray is to give me grace to adhere to a strong faith, To navigate the complexities of existence, To find meaning and purpose in this transient life, And from the pestilences of life, to acquire resistance! Yet, frail I am and when through trials and tribulations as I pass, And when they upset my balance leaving me unsteady, To you Lord, earnestly I beseech, not to let me down, Never allowing me to get drowned in the eddy. In this vast universe and in its amazing wonders From the mountains high and the oceans deep I see the working of your Providential hand, That from death and all dangers our lives keep. When questions arise shaking my trust and faith, All I wish is to fully abide by Your Word, Entrusting my body and my soul into Your loving hands, And like a child cling on to the safety of Thy hold.

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Date: 10/11/2023 11:34:00 PM
This is true beauty of being in God's hands, trusting in good and bad times to keep God out front in the center leading the way , as His light manifest His love , compassion, peace and joy through you : )
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Date: 10/11/2023 7:23:00 AM
In those moments I remember the 23rd Psalm and it brings me both courage and comfort. I feel similar reading this heartfelt missive.
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Date: 10/10/2023 6:22:00 PM
A heartfelt write, Valsa! Love the next to last verse best!
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Date: 10/10/2023 4:37:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to an all-powerful and Loving God, Valsa. A FAV for me to read in times of weakness. Your thoughts resonate with my thoughts on the process of faces trials and tribulations we are told all must face in this life. Abiding to the Word and placing our trust in God is the perfect formula for pleasing our Creator God. Smiles ~ Blessings my dear friend. Bill p.s. Good luck in the contest!
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Bill Baker
Date: 10/12/2023 5:49:00 PM
No hurry, Valsa, sometimes we just don't have time. We're friends, so no problems. Hugs, Bill
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Valsa George
Date: 10/11/2023 8:32:00 AM
Thanks a lot dear Bill for your beautiful comments on many of my poems. As I am too busy with some household responsibilities, I shall respond to your poems only after two days.
Date: 10/10/2023 2:01:00 PM
"Over the turbulent waves, as I get tossed, The promise of His Word gives me courage. His everlasting love, I feel in my heart." -- Spiritually beautiful!! "To navigate the complexities of existence, To find meaning and purpose in this transient life, And from the pestilences of life, to acquire resistance!" Words to cling to and live by. Blessed inspiration. Thank you. "Entrusting my body and my soul into Your loving hands, And like a child cling on to the safety of Thy hold." Poetic and wonderfully alive.
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Date: 10/10/2023 11:06:00 AM
Dear Valsa, the tremendous spectrum of emotions and unfathomable insights that you have delicately tied into this Poem has utterly enthralled me. My everlasting faith in the Divine's great power and the astounding marvels that His compassion may bestow is genuinely unshakeable. The only path ahead is to yield to His divine guidance, We discover the resilience that endures through unshakable hope and a firm conviction in His omniscience, aided by the influence these qualities impart upon us.
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Valsa George
Date: 10/11/2023 8:29:00 AM
Thank you so much dear Lasaad for your uplifting comment. Shall respond to your poems later as I am too busy for two days.
Date: 10/10/2023 10:27:00 AM
such an uplifting poem valsa, all my prayers for Israel by the way, thanks for the beautiful poetry
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Date: 10/10/2023 5:26:00 AM
Wow, dear poetess, I'm absolutely awestruck by the amount of emotions and depth that you've infused so powerfully in this write.. I do have firm belief and faith in the supreme strength of the Almighty and the miracles that His blessings can do.. When life coats our essence with hues of trials and tribulations, the only way is to surrender to Him and He will take care of us, as we are all His children.. Perseverance and resilience only come from hope and strong belief and by the power they give
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Hiya Sharma
Date: 10/10/2023 5:27:00 AM
Truly a brilliant poem this is and I really felt every word, so wonderfully articulated here with rhythmic flow.. Saved in my FAVs!
Date: 10/10/2023 12:55:00 AM
Faith is blind in a way. We cannot understand the mystery that is revealed by God. Consider Satan's temptation. If you eat the fruit, you will be like God. A blatant lie. Blessings
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Date: 10/10/2023 12:05:00 AM
thank you. That was a beautiful and tragic poem.
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