MUSINGS ON A QUIET BEACH


Sky, Azure blue this afternoon, the golden sun blazing,
I walked along the edge of a quiet beach, the waves lapping
At my feet, the creamy colored sand through my toes running,
Dark, raven-like clouds collided up high, lightening breathtaking,
The rain came own like torrents, and the thunder deafening,
Late afternoon creeps upon me, raindrops decreasing.
A rainbow appears in the sky, intensely alluring,
The heat becomes tolerable, the Crayola coloring
Of this hope driven dream, the rainbow, absolutely outstanding.
I sat on the damp sand as the evening began drawing
Me into a darker night, my mind started wandering,
Imagine me a mermaid with my merman, a myth depicting,
I looked up at a full smiling moon, so enchanting,
The moon now stood out, within an onyx darkening
Sky and the stars glittered like diamonds, silvery, shining,
The full moon shone upon the indigo-colored waves churning,
The horizon dark, the white horses vanilla white, glowing,
The ocean was alive and active, fish jumping and playing
The tide began coming in, so I stood up, a shooting
Star traversed the night sky, what a beautiful ending
To a glorious day by the sea and a night worth applauding.
I quickened my pace and reached my car, repeating
In my mind the happenings and images of the day, composing
Them into a so-called song, wish I could sing, and tell how rewarding
A memory like today recorded in musical song, would be deserving,
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Ricci Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 9:53 AM
Jennifer Jennifer Jennifer. Oh the worth of the beach tranquility the thought of song. Allow me to say be it in person and actually witnessing the tides directly or seeing it through your mind and imagination, both are something that money can not buy. Both are harbored within one's soul. That Jennifer is the wonder of it all... - It was a pleasure reading and feeling this entry because it is felt. Have a wonderful weekend. Love Peace and Blessings always. (smile)
George Avatar
April 12, 2024 at 3:39 AM
This memory of your visit to the beach and the the lovely scenes recorded in musical song are so bewitching. I felt like being with you. Beaches and sea strands are always my fascination too. "The full moon shone upon the indigo-colored waves. "The moon now stood out, within an onyx darkening Sky and the stars glittered like diamonds, silvery, shining, hurning, The horizon dark, the white horses vanilla white, glowing, The ocean was alive and active, fish jumping and playing" ! What a lovely melange of scenes. Absolutely love your descriptions dear Jenny !
Poet Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 11:44 AM
Jennifer, your poem is truly remarkable, evoking a sense of tranquility and enchantment. It beautifully transports me to the seaside, an extraordinary and infrequent experience when one is far from the coast. Your words skillfully capture the essence of walking along the shore, feeling the gentle caress of the water on my feet, and immersing myself in the serene melodies of the waves crashing against the shore. The overall effect is profoundly blissful. May you encounter many more days like this, filled with such exquisite moments.
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 26, 2024 at 11:37 AM
Hello Jennifer, Hi! This poem made me feel like i was on a beach. I would be walking along the water feeling the water on my feet. listening to the soothing sounds of the waves coming to shore. My friend. enjoy your day. /Darlene./
Wolf Avatar
March 23, 2024 at 8:21 PM
Reads and sounds so blissful, Jennifer. May this kind of day often come your way! ~ Gershon
Baker Avatar
March 22, 2024 at 4:08 PM
It's nice to have a day like your day, every once in a while, just to keep the juices flowing, Jen. Thanks for sharing your day and evening with us, my dear friend. Hugs, Bill Lovely imagery throughout!
Buhagiar Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 10:16 AM
A cycle of great imagery that uplifts the heart. Well done.
Edmonds  Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 2:50 AM
All in all a perfect day Jennifer, peaceful and charming, how I love to be beside the sea, a rare and wonderful excursion when you’re miles from the sea, like me… Hugs sent your way dear friend… Beryl
Goldsmith Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 9:30 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. I can see it clearly. I love the beach but none here. Wonderful ending. Have a wonderful day..................
Kalita Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:33 AM
Such wonderful penning on the exclusive memontos. A blessed and blissful read from all prospects. Regards
One Avatar
March 17, 2024 at 7:21 AM
Hello my friend, your captivating poem vividly portrays a day spent by the sea, evoking a sense of tranquility, wonder, and enchantment. The poet skillfully describes the natural beauty of the surroundings, from the azure blue sky and golden sun to the creamy sand and dark, raven-like clouds. The imagery of the rain coming down like torrents and the thunder deafening creates a palpable sense of drama and intensity.
Legros Kelley Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 5:00 PM
Such a dreamy poem! I love the ocean. I haven't been to see it for many years, but in memory I visit often! The ending of your magical day, a shooting star traversing the night sky, perfect!
M  Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 3:39 PM
Very lovely Jennifer….love you the mermaid with your merman!! Debx
Allison Avatar
March 16, 2024 at 2:07 PM
magnificent mesmerising musings Jennifer! hugs jan xx
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