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For Ink Empress's Musings of Love contest..

So this is just a musing written in raw emotions..

“You try to be faithful And sometimes you're cruel. You are mine. Then, you leave. Without you, I can't cope." Rumi in the kingdom of love, nothing is simple, not even musings, so tell me: in your annoyance do you still think of me or am i just another common cliché in Rumi's philosophies for cosmic connections, must we be a contradiction of circumstance when our story has been sung beyond the reach of stars, so despite the dystopian demons, i keep hope in the invisible golden harp strings, yet to compose our swansong oh mistress of medusa in splitting seasons, when serpents spit venom, your British horizon soul, coupled with your climate change heart, procreate porcelain patience, where rhythms of rage lead to breathless silence, but i never forget you it can be tiresome battling against ebony lashes from metaphorical daggers when vertigo eyes hunt for their prey and i wonder if i was at shooting distance would you pull the trigger to rip my heart like shredding secretive documents but despite bonfire breaths, my samurai spirit has become immune to momentary flames, adopting a mermaid mind, finding sanctuary in deep waters until the last ember dies, as at the end of each storm, when rainbows reappear, i resurface upon your ivory shores, for what am i, but a sea urchin and you the empress of the sea, so each time you are cruel, i wait for the return of tender gestures, as i know it is your veil of vulnerability you hide from the world, but in the intricacies of conflict, i am still the moonlight glowing upon your ripples, as i know the code to your handcrafted heart, floating in wandering waves, as you still ignite intimate spiritual sparks of soothing sensuality, so never abandon me - forever in the imperfections of love, in my abundance of flaws i know you adore me internally and externally, for we are refuge and safe haven for the broken, like a masterpiece of alliterative adjectives glowing like gems in topaz textures upon mookaite mosaics I know I'm no Leonardo Di Caprio, I've never been as romantic as Romeo, so love me for what I am today, I am not your past of wasted sunsets, so ascend with me like tomorrow's sunrise

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Date: 2/20/2024 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on winning with this beautiful epic emotion filled poem of love. Well done S.O.
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Date: 2/20/2024 5:31:00 AM
Dear silent one, where do i start? You are really the best (not being biased) ever that iv read so far for romance, your way with expressing is not just poetically eloquent and flawless! But also evocative and has that sincere voice, which makes the readers feel so much! I actually cried reading this: especially those opening lines, sometimes relationships arent always calm and smooth, but true love, accepts and would selflessly give and ponder in such times too whether love is intact! I am
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Ink Empress
Date: 2/20/2024 5:33:00 AM
Truly in aww captivates and as we can see from comments too, this did do well and is much appreciated by your readers. congrats on that and also for the well deserved placement in my contest. The ending is hauntingly soulful and definitely will stay within my heart for a very long time! Fave
Date: 2/16/2024 9:30:00 AM
Wowww just wow, I am in love with your love poetry Silent One! Such devotion, such passion and then also the tenderness that drips from your verses is just so sublime! Second half of your poem is just heart stealing brother "I am still the moonlight glowing upon your ripples" this line is just heart melting and also the next stanza. Spilling magic and love in your poetry effortlessly! I want to just keep on and on to praise this one. Well deserved POTD! Congratulations brother! FAV for sure!
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Date: 2/15/2024 6:21:00 AM
I see this has done well for you. Very nice when you can collect over twenty-five comments without a POTD. Sorry I'm late to the party. Bonfire breaths, climate change hearts, what's not to love? Leonard DiCaprio? Never thought of him as a heartthrob, but what do I know. That last line is superb poetry
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Date: 2/14/2024 11:49:00 AM
From the depths of your heart, and an ocean of feelings sensuous, wavering. I found humor in the beginning but then the “climate change heart, procreate porcelain patience” godsmacked! I hear the ponderous beat of her stormy heart and felt your tiring battle. Your descriptions and references whoa! Still passionate, you offer her your love, Romantic SO! Loved it!
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Date: 2/12/2024 9:08:00 PM
Passionate and romantic epic poetry, Silent One. One of my favorite verses starts, "but despite bonfire breaths, my samurai spirit has become immune to momentary flames", I love the strength and commitment of this metaphor and the conclusions of the verse. So much is said of the ups and downs of love and the pursuit thereof. My kind of poetry, my friend, A FAV for my list. Good luck in the contest. Seems little a winner to me. A poet frie4nd in Texas, Bill
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Date: 2/12/2024 9:31:00 AM
procreate porcelain patience, where rhythms of rage lead to breathless silence… adopting a mermaid mind, finding sanctuary in deep waters…I’m sure you are better than DiCaprio and Romeo. Really it is two souls that come together! Great as always!
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Date: 2/11/2024 6:32:00 PM
I think this will require more than one read. A veritable roller coaster of feelings and imagery. I think you did this very artfully. A true pleasure to read. Your star rises high with this one.
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Date: 2/11/2024 6:20:00 PM
a wonderful poem, very touching words of declaration and tenderness, thanks for the exquisite poetry, wawwww
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Date: 2/11/2024 3:47:00 PM
Dear Silent One, your poem is truly a masterpiece. It exudes beauty and elegance, captivating the reader with its turbulent yet captivating narrative akin to that of a captivating novel. The way in which you skillfully intertwine raw anguish and unwavering optimism mirrors the intricate nature of love itself. I am particularly enamored by the incorporation of the Rumi quote, which sets the tone for a love that transcends the limitations of this earthly realm.
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Date: 2/11/2024 10:50:00 AM
I knew someone as a friend who was welcoming and then rejecting. I really liked being around that person as they were funny and enjoyable to be with. However, there was an endless cycle of passive aggression that never ceased. Your poem reminds me of that time in my life and how I finally decided I would avoid that person. It's a very fine line when dealing with love and emotion. Your poems always get me thinking. I would hope the situation would change but it didn't.
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Date: 2/11/2024 9:30:00 AM
Hi SO, the intrinsic beauty of your poem leaves me at a loss for words. Which amazing image to highlight as they flow like water over a waterfall! Which emotional confidence to muse on? Which complex line to hold onto as a source of new "musings?" Poetically magnificent, SO. A sure winner for the contest. Blessings!
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Date: 2/11/2024 6:11:00 AM
There is so much manly confidence in these raw emotions you express here, "your samurai spirit has become immune to momentary flames..." In a world where men, true to themselves, are often shied away from because of their innate need to be truly masculine, these are not "Simple Musings..." They are deep and complex, and show awareness of feminine fragility... Yet hold to a determination to not lose face, or "headship" - which many woman can be nervous about.
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Date: 2/11/2024 6:27:00 AM
Maybe she's loved "too deeply" and yes, you "know the code of her handcrafted heart" which you have sensed "in intricate intimacies..." "I know you adore me" "even in the imperfections of love,, in the abundance of my flaws" "love me for what I am today, I am not your past of wasted sunsets..." This is such a deeply moving poem, resounding with reality, humility, strength, belief in hidden goodness in each other, unyielding hope. Love it! Aqua M.
Date: 2/11/2024 4:52:00 AM
Not bad you are good and the girl will be lucky to have you by your side.. good luck brother
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Date: 2/11/2024 2:10:00 AM
Love, everyone wants to be in it. Only thing is, the further you're in, the more complex it becomes. Would you change it, though, probably not?
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Date: 2/11/2024 1:53:00 AM
Gosh, dear Silent One, this is extremely emotive and heartfelt.. What an impeccable poem you've woven and I can see, these feelings have been directly crafted from the heart.. Immensely soulful and that's what true love looks like.. No one is perfect in this world, but we find our home in the person we love, as both souls complete each other..That last stanza was breathtaking!! "oh mistress of medusa in splitting seasons,when serpents spit venom, your British horizon soul" WOW!! your wordplay is
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Date: 2/11/2024 1:56:00 AM
is truly so magical and I'm in awe of the imagery that you've painted too "adopting a mermaid mind", " but a sea urchin and you the empress of the sea" Awwn, so romantic and beautiful. "glowing like gems in topaz textures upon mookaite mosaics" Love that.. Ahh, such a fascinating piece.. A fav this is and I'm sure Ink will absolutely love this too! :)
Date: 2/11/2024 1:19:00 AM
"I am not your past of wasted sunsets, so ascend with me like tomorrow's sunrise"..... What an intimate and touching plea.... and what a bright option. The lover in you is so ardently bent on winning the lady of your love. I know you speak from the depth of your heart. "as at the end of each storm, when rainbows reappear, i resurface upon your ivory shores,for what am i, but a sea urchin and you the empress of the sea", Don't leave hope .... ! Keep waiting. So powerfully articulated! Into my FAVE Silent One.
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Date: 2/10/2024 10:13:00 PM
Hello Silent One, this is beautiful! Good luck in the contest. Silent One Blessings
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Date: 2/10/2024 9:16:00 PM
A beautiful, captivating write, dear S1; as always, you draw your reader in with something different from you every time. I love your musings and your words that flow.“The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched. They must be felt with the heart.” ? Helen Keller: Your poetry touches people's hearts. Good luck in the contest. Though I don't think you need it. A Winner in my eyes...Hugs
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Date: 2/10/2024 6:57:00 PM
Dearest Silent One, your poem reads like a tempestuous novel! The raw pain and unyielding hope intertwine, mirroring the complexities of love itself. I'm very drawn to the Rumi quote, setting the stage for a love beyond earthly constraints. The vulnerability in questioning "am I a cliché?" and the defiant declaration "I am still the moonlight" create a captivating emotional journey. And, yes, your ending, with its imperfections linger long after reading. Powerful work! - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 2/10/2024 3:28:00 PM
Very lovely poem lovely Silent One!
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Date: 2/10/2024 2:45:00 PM
Dear Silent One, WOW..such raw emotions in this love ballad. Atleast I will call a love ballad. I'm blown away by your talent. Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 2/10/2024 2:20:00 PM
Beautiful poem and I liked the same lines as Sara did. This poem expresses a lot of emotion. love phyl
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Date: 2/10/2024 1:49:00 PM
Very beautiful- raw vulnerability is shown throughout. Causes the reader to feel your pain...
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Date: 2/10/2024 1:39:00 PM
A gorgeous poem and picture, Silent One! I love the amazing imagery throughout. Good luck in the contest. :)
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