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Musings From a Foxhole

The sergeant volunteered me for guard this cold and moonless night. I was rushed to the front as a new replacement addin' to my plight. I don't even know the sergeant's name and I doubt that he knows mine. The only friend I have is my rifle as I stand guard along the Rhine. The snow keeps pilin' up and my foxhole is damp and cold. If the enemy overruns my position I'm not to surrender I was told. Great chance I have with my rifle to fend off a charge by Tiger tanks! But in the army you do what you're told when in the lowly ranks! If the Hun crosses no-man's land and we are suddenly attacked, I sure do hope I don't let my buddies down and fail to react. Lord, I pray for courage as about me bullets and bombs assail. Can I kill or maim another man? Lord, I pray Thy mercy will prevail! I'm so cold and hungry - how I long for a boilin' cup of joe. I ain't had a hot meal for nigh on a week since I left Bordeaux. My feet and hands are ice - I ain't slept for about three days. Like an old veteran, already I'm developin' that thousand-yard gaze. It's a danged good thing I ain't runnin' this doggone war. I'd put them politicians on the line - I bet there'd be no more gore! I just hope I can survive this army life and get back to the farm. Shucks! I'm a peaceful feller and don't mean no one any harm! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired © All Rights Reserved

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/12/2011 9:04:00 AM
This is so descriptive, I'm vicariously experiencing the surroundings of the soldier in the foxhole. I did not have an entry for the balloon contest. That contest took place before I first entered this site.
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Date: 2/11/2011 11:42:00 AM
You tell it like it is, Sarge. Great piece. Bless these guys that are faced with this. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 2/9/2011 1:58:00 PM
those poor poor guys,what they must endure, and often for no good reason! Keep up your great writing., Robert. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/9/2011 9:30:00 AM
The politicians who declare war should be leading the charge on the front lines, Bob. If they experienced what you describe here, I do believe there would be fewer wars. Because I was born a woman, I was always grateful I could not be drafted. I don't think I could pull a trigger and shoot someone if my life depended on it. Excellent poem, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/8/2011 10:07:00 PM
I can't even begin to imagine that feeling. For that I am thankful. Poem s like this will help insure that history remembers the sacrafice of the true heros
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Date: 2/8/2011 7:58:00 PM
Some of the best poems Ive ever read have been about war..1st world war..I just got a book of Walt Whitmans war poetry...as usual you did a great job..from the perspective of the simple soldier. BG
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