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Musings After Getting Shot

i’ve been shot.
this is hysterical.
i mean historical.
        this is good
           no, better.
the softest tip, not even
a black and blue pinch.
             meanest
          no, but yes
          meaningful.
amazing grace in a tube;
i’ve trusted a God that is good
     up to this point,
           forever still —
                    not ill.
should i bend over for the second installment?
               now that
                   would
               be
             hysterical;
   historical too.
perhaps for this i’d keep my mask on
             my face —
red underneath.

3/24/2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Allen Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 8:33 AM
Like this one Kim xx
Wolf Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 8:55 PM
Such creative musings move my needle! Ingenious, Kim! :) gwUPA
Rodrigues Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Logan Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 5:40 AM
I'd say your arm was a bullseye and the arrow merely pinched, but that's enough to make you a winner. I'm going to fave this...just cuz I like it!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 11:04 AM
Thank you, sweet lady! :)
Ellis Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 11:16 PM
Timely poem when so many people are nervous about..I needed this light taste of humor
Rodrigues Avatar
March 25, 2021 at 4:56 AM
I was a bit nervous but everything was good.
Dietrich Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:48 PM
very cutely done!!
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Romios Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:46 PM
Enjoyed this,, Pangie. Xx
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 6:06 PM
Thank you :)
Leffanta Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 11:35 AM
Well said! Always best to get the point of a pandemic! Aloha! Rico
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:40 PM
Aloha - yes!
Bauer Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 11:21 AM
ha! very funny, kim! hope you have no reactions to either one. it's great that you've gotten it...
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:39 PM
Thank you! :)
Cunningham Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 11:08 AM
Lol, have the grandkids been using you for target practice. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
March 24, 2021 at 3:38 PM
LOL! The little one, yes :) tears
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