Get Your Premium Membership

Musings After Getting Shot

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Kim Rodrigues.


i’ve been shot. this is hysterical. i mean historical. this is good no, better. the softest tip, not even a black and blue pinch. meanest no, but yes meaningful. amazing grace in a tube; i’ve trusted a God that is good up to this point, forever still — not ill. should i bend over for the second installment? now that would be hysterical; historical too. perhaps for this i’d keep my mask on my face — red underneath. 3/24/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 6/9/2021 8:33:00 AM
Like this one Kim xx
Login to Reply
Date: 3/25/2021 8:55:00 PM
Such creative musings move my needle! Ingenious, Kim! :) gwUPA
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/26/2021 5:00:00 AM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 3/25/2021 5:40:00 AM
I'd say your arm was a bullseye and the arrow merely pinched, but that's enough to make you a winner. I'm going to fave this...just cuz I like it!
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2021 11:04:00 AM
Thank you, sweet lady! :)
Date: 3/24/2021 11:16:00 PM
Timely poem when so many people are nervous about..I needed this light taste of humor
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/25/2021 4:56:00 AM
I was a bit nervous but everything was good.
Date: 3/24/2021 3:48:00 PM
very cutely done!!
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2021 6:06:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! :)
Date: 3/24/2021 3:46:00 PM
Enjoyed this,, Pangie. Xx
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2021 6:06:00 PM
Thank you :)
Date: 3/24/2021 11:35:00 AM
Well said! Always best to get the point of a pandemic! Aloha! Rico
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2021 3:40:00 PM
Aloha - yes!
Date: 3/24/2021 11:21:00 AM
ha! very funny, kim! hope you have no reactions to either one. it's great that you've gotten it...
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2021 3:39:00 PM
Thank you! :)
Date: 3/24/2021 11:08:00 AM
Lol, have the grandkids been using you for target practice. Tom
Login to Reply
Rodrigues Avatar
Kim Rodrigues
Date: 3/24/2021 3:38:00 PM
LOL! The little one, yes :) tears

Book: Reflection on the Important Things