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Music's Moment

wisps of air unite in glorious sound spilling from the hearts of those on stage; time freezes in the calmest, deepest way five hundred watch, connected to one breath, the spirit of one flowing, yearning line, straining to hear the sorrow put to rest farewell, mine past-- come later, future, too-- this moment is ours and music our divine.

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Date: 6/14/2019 2:43:00 PM
I love your opening line. this is beautifully said from both perspectives. Jeanne
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Date: 6/7/2019 5:44:00 PM
So nicely captured, that moment. A concert-goer myself, I can just feel it---as you've described it. Oncor! Keep writing, Faith Ellen! Wonderful first poem on Poetry Soup. Warm wishes, Gershon
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Date: 6/6/2019 7:27:00 PM
Bravo, Faith. Your poem is lovely. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
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Faith Ellen Lam
Date: 6/6/2019 9:36:00 PM
Thank you for the kind welcome and encouraging words!
Date: 6/4/2019 11:03:00 AM
Hey! Love the poem! I love how you captured both the feeling of watching a concert and the feeling of playing in one! The imagery is beautiful! Welcome to poetrysoup! ~Heather
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Faith Ellen Lam
Date: 6/6/2019 9:36:00 PM
Thanks, Heather :)

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