Music To My Ears

The echoes dance
on the walls of the alleyway,
to the rhythm of arrival.

My heart races with joy,
while listening to the melody
of your heels growing nearer
on the quaint cobblestone...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Fraser Avatar
October 31, 2009 at 8:25 AM
I can hear the steps echoing down the alleyway Raul, lovely poem >> James
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October 24, 2009 at 1:40 AM
Me encantan esos palabras, Raúl! What a welcome. Y gracias para tus comentarios....Gert
Oremraeh Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 11:15 AM
Beautiful images you've conjured here. Thank you for the welcome to the site.
Chircop Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 7:07 AM
Her approach seems beautiful...Love the sweet melody here echoing in dancing..Charma
Brown Avatar
October 23, 2009 at 4:04 AM
I enjoyed reading you poetry this morning. It is beautiful.Thank you for sharing it Raul. May you have a wonderful day full of inspiration. Love, Carol
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October 22, 2009 at 8:00 PM
This is really nice...enjoyed reading...Marty
Gorelick Avatar
October 22, 2009 at 7:35 PM
What a great poem..I think your in love! BG
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