Music of the Wind

The Tchaikovsky winds,
Caress the Russian gardens:
Waltz of the flowers.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2009 at 9:38 AM
Congratulations on making the hot poems list. Sara
Fraser Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:57 PM
Another super Senyru Raul, just perfect >> James
Canady Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 10:43 AM
I'm getting Closer, Raul ... getting closer (and how did you know I'm a Tchaikovsky Chick?) (smile) My Two 'T's Tchaikovsky and Tennyson ... Battle of 1812 and The Highwayman... (all I need is a cigarette - and I don't even smoke! - smile) Seriously Great Senryu MoonBee
Brown Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 6:35 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem today. Please continue writing and sharing with us Raul. This is truly beautiful. Love, Carol
Pickett Avatar
September 29, 2009 at 12:44 AM
"Waltz of the flowers"..... Dude, kudos on this one......:JP]
Chircop Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 5:03 PM
the winds of romance and class by the greatest russian composer caressing the gardens,i love the love line -Walts of the flowers--excellent beautiful,my fav work of his is "Swan Lake",another gem--Charma
Gorelick Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:20 PM
Yikes, i love it. Now I'll be humming this all afternoon. How do you do it day after day? BG
Culverhouse Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:01 PM
nicely penned, what is tchaikovsky winds?
Goff Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 3:01 PM
delightful image! Raul! and thanks for your congrats... jim
Johnson Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 2:58 PM
This is a lovely senryu. I can picture the Waltz of the flowers. Thank you for your congratulations. I am just back from a trip so late with my responses. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 12:57 PM
A favorite classic....so fitting to such a lovely poem! ~ Great combination, Raul! ~ Carrie
Kendrick Avatar
September 28, 2009 at 12:30 PM
Love this one Raul. I can see the plants swaying to the music. Keep writing. Sara
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