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There is silence in turmoil… joy in the midst of pain Sweetness in the bitter… music in the rain There is light in darkness… illuminated faith shines Hues of colorful sighs… insights into the signs There is beauty in unsightliness… kindness in the lost hope Gentle warmth in a chill… that leaves a way to cope There is laughter in the sorrow… mirth in the grim Even though there is mourning… that leaves the eye dim There is a whisper of inspiration… soothing away the cry Allowing a tear to pierce the heart… mute the brightest sky There is grace in the loathing… even hatred brings insight Precious moments of understanding… can bring pure delight There is goodness in the shame… for it means a heart is contrite No dishonor in remorse… even disgrace is brighter in the moonlight There is warmth in the winter… even though ice chills the bones Fires breathe tenderness… to those who won’t throw stones There is caring in the selfish… when they mend their greed Welcoming the attention… of those who are selfless indeed There is love in the callous… even a hard heart can be thawed When there is the compassion… to give mercy we should applaud

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Date: 2/1/2022 1:58:00 PM
I truly love this - seeing the hope in all things - Love it Gina
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Date: 6/13/2021 3:37:00 PM
Gina, This is superb, an absolute delight. The rhyme scheme is awesome, and the imagery is glorious. I've read it multiple times; my love of it grows with each reading. Hugs, Paul
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Date: 2/15/2021 5:44:00 AM
Beautiful couplets, Dear Regina. Love all the inspirational lines, especially "There is warmth in the winter.." A very special composition, indeed. The title is stunning! Love~ Mala
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Date: 1/31/2021 10:57:00 AM
Lovely thoughts in this couplet, and the photo says it too. Beautiful and inspiring.
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Date: 1/28/2021 5:20:00 PM
Superb set of couplets that describe and rhyme beautifully.
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Date: 1/28/2021 11:37:00 AM
I have faved your poem. Again, oh my goodness, so beautiful <3
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Date: 1/28/2021 11:36:00 AM
Oh Regina, my goodness, this is beautiful. It would be so pretty on a printed version of your accompanying photo. I'm in awe. I love this so much!
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Date: 1/27/2021 9:08:00 PM
What a joy to read! I love these lines, "There is silence in turmoil… joy in the midst of pain Sweetness in the bitter… music in the rain" Congratulations dear Gina...More blessings..
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Date: 1/27/2021 6:49:00 AM
A truly delightful write, Gina and a fave for me:)
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Date: 1/26/2021 3:05:00 PM
i like the repetitive style of this one with the couplet form. Very nicely crafted, Gina.
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Date: 1/26/2021 1:54:00 PM
Such a lovely insightful piece Gina, full of great imagery and lovely rhyme. Superb indeed!
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Date: 1/26/2021 11:34:00 AM
Beautiful ...wise..insightful..loving It just flows !! Wonderful .Thank you for this write Regina! Susan :) A fav
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Date: 1/26/2021 5:53:00 AM
Exceptionally delightful and true dearest, Regina! Blessings!
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Date: 1/26/2021 5:30:00 AM
Delightful couplets. All full of inspiration and goodness. Well written. ~~
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Date: 1/26/2021 3:42:00 AM
There is so much insight and wisdom here. This is going into my faves. Great stuff here. God Bless, JB
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