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From a city's hilltop , I gaze down there below with lights in rhythmic hop; notes bouncing to and fro... on alleys where life croons women dance as skirts fly; and blues whip juggled tunes sax cooling a flamed sigh! ........... “Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life”--- Berthold Auerbach ~ poet and author ~ .................... Repost 9/29/2016 Contest 213 of Brian Strand

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2016 11:20:00 PM

Nette, Congratulations on your win. XOXOX Linda :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 1/28/2016 2:05:00 AM

Wonderful write nette .. truly inspiring.. Congrats on big win!!

Skat A

Date: 1/26/2016 12:20:00 PM

NETTE, CONGRATS ON YOUR NICE WIN. **SKAT**

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/26/2016 9:37:00 AM

For me this is a pe Donal favorite. Congrats on your win.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/26/2016 8:35:00 AM

Nette, congratulations on your placement! You deserve the win! :) -Hans

Andrew Crisci

Date: 1/26/2016 8:17:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Nette. I can hear the music play and see the " Women dance as skirts fly". Everything and everyone comes to life in your dynamic poem. This is a magnificent poem vibrant with life! Best Wishes, Andrew.

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/25/2016 9:35:00 PM

I would have rated higher. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Lin Lane

Date: 1/25/2016 8:56:00 PM

Love every word, nette...well done.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/25/2016 5:52:00 PM

love your musical take on the theme congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 1/25/2016 4:27:00 PM

Nette, congrats on your placement in the contest, very good poem *smiles* -luloo

Bl Devnath

Date: 1/24/2016 11:22:00 AM

i love music too. i feel it's real. Good luck my friend,bl

James Inman

Date: 1/24/2016 8:47:00 AM

Sounds of the city, wonderfully expressed. Great imagery, nice flow and beautiful use of words.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/24/2016 8:11:00 AM

Good one for the contest..Way to go..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

White Sage

Date: 1/24/2016 6:07:00 AM

excellent write Nette...best of luck in the contest

Arthur Vaso

Date: 1/23/2016 9:28:00 PM

Loved this, for me music and poetry are like a couple, each inspires the other! :)

Kp Nunez

Date: 1/23/2016 9:05:00 PM

A uniquely creative way to tackle the prompt, Nette. It's just amazing meter and rhyme on these lovely lines. Loved the "notes bouncing to and fro... on alleys where life croons"...huggs

Frederic Parker

Date: 1/23/2016 6:08:00 PM

this poem took me back some years my friend....I loved Gato Barbieri..good luck

Matthew Anish

Date: 1/23/2016 5:27:00 PM

Ah,jazz! Nice tribute to the great American art form. Peace & Love Matthew Anish