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Muse and Hues

My mind wanders off into daydreams quite often. Or are they just playing scenes I have forgotten? I spent some time reading from various topics. Taught musings around concern I have forgotten. What I loathe and always hate is the crying wolf. Still young to ponder on what could be forgotten. Shades of burning amber and red fall to the ground. Light caressing fresh touch scenes can't be forgotten. A soundless rustle of leaves; wild inspiration. How to reveal scenes so they are ne'er forgotten? When I call to mind a bunny trapped in spotlights, Hunter who catches broad ones is ne'er forgotten. Natural muse, tranquility among lush trees. The calm, swaying trees vowed not to be forgotten. Oh, to return to my youth for only one night.  It was a scene, maybe ne'er to be forgotten.
3rd place contest winner Written: January 03, 2023 My Muse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Regina McIntosh

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Date: 1/8/2023 8:29:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. A wonderful write/picture. Enjoy your win/day with blessings..........
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Date: 1/8/2023 2:04:00 AM
Wonderful writing - Congrats to your muse. God bless you dear friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 1/7/2023 10:03:00 PM
So many scenes remain etched in memories. Your desire to recreate those scenes and go back to the days of youth find beautiful expression here. Wonderful composition. All the Best dear Lasaad!
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Date: 1/5/2023 11:09:00 AM
Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. These are not so easy to write but it seems you have done a good job. Sara
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Date: 1/3/2023 1:31:00 PM
Muse and hues shine in this form. Well crafted ghazal my friend. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/3/2023 11:10:00 AM
Lasaad, this poem exudes a lush richness of images that carry your memories and your desire for one more night of youth! Best wishes for the contest. Blessings dear friend!
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Date: 1/3/2023 10:54:00 AM
This poem is very rich with striking scenes, Lasaad. A poetic gem! Good luck in the contest, Evelyn
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