Murmurs of My Heart

Midst desolation, lift my rhythmic beats in songs of adoration.

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Len Gasun

Date: 7/17/2023 4:40:00 PM

Murmurs of my heart Contest Judged: 7/14/2023 7:26:00 PM Sponsored by: JCB Brul Place 1 (up to 2 multi-w) THANK U SO MUCH MY DEAREST POET FRIENDS FOR YOUR CONGRATULATORY GREETINGS. i'LL VISIT YOU SOON. GOD BLESS US ALL.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2023 7:23:00 AM

The tone and rhythm of your verse impeccable! Congratulations, Len!

Len Gasun
Date: 7/17/2023 7:45:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my nonoku and your uplifting comment my dear friend Kim. God bless you and your writings. Hugs.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2023 12:41:00 AM

A poem of mixed moods. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Len Gasun
Date: 7/17/2023 7:44:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my monoku, your uplifting words and congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend, Christuraj! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Bill Baker

Date: 7/11/2023 5:37:00 PM

Great Monoku, Len. Very meaningful, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 7/17/2023 7:42:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Bill for reading my poem and your uplifting comment. God bless you and your writings always. Hugs