Murmurs of My Heart

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written 7/8/2023

erratic fire within hearth flames ~ longing to touch you once again

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Jcb Brul

Date: 7/15/2023 7:49:00 AM

Such a romantic piece! Congratulations on your win and thank you for participating in the contest. Blessings.^__^ JCB

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2023 7:18:00 AM

Heartfelt! Congratulations, Eve!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 7/15/2023 12:36:00 AM

"longing to Touch" - passionate monoku. Beautifully written. Congratulations!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/9/2023 3:17:00 PM

Ahh!! I enjoyed reading this one today. Thank you for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Sally Eslinger

Date: 7/8/2023 12:05:00 PM

Oh, Eve! Darn! You made me actually cry reading this…choosing such flowing, soft, reassuring, painter’s words to describe, truly, home and, once again the home we’ll find again. Lovely poem. It reads like a sight of softly colored pastels of vintage roses. Blessings to you, sally

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/8/2023 11:42:00 AM

Wowie Eve!co you know how beautiful this is ? Not only the form, but-the presentation ? Love, Panagiota.