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Murmurs of a Chair

Anxiety chokes thought Hearing murmurs of a chair In a shadowed room Some glimmers of secrecy Hankers in this lonely end? For Rick Praise's contest:” Chair in a shadowed room

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/10/2011 11:07:00 AM
Joseph, I wanted to thank you for your comments. Feeling a bit better today and am trying to catch up on some comments. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/7/2011 9:04:00 AM
Compelling poem, Joseph. The first line is especially awesome and I love your description of secrecy remaining in the ends of the shadowed room. Best wishes in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/7/2011 4:24:00 AM
Hi Jo- I am fascinated by this picture that Rick choose. Your take is very nice and full of wonder...what happened in this chair of yours? You now have me guessing..nice angle. Best of luck to you. Gwendolen
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Date: 6/7/2011 12:27:00 AM
another wonder from you, joseph! come visit me..:) huggs and congrats with your zulu baskets!
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Date: 6/6/2011 9:25:00 PM
A dark one like mine. I enjoyed reading this, JOseph!
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Date: 6/6/2011 8:49:00 PM
brilliant write Joseph... like the flow of the piece luv.. good luck in the contest luv..
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Date: 6/6/2011 6:22:00 PM
Very nice interpretation of the picture with a nice perspective, Joseph
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