Murmurs and Soft Sighs

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A storm blew in when I peered into those dark eyes Fearing lightning would strike in bolts of midnight fire Wanting his touch, though it might lead to my demise Then full lips swept over mine, igniting desire Thunder roared in my head with each deepening kiss I heard it drumming in warm breaths against my ear Fingertips danced lightly over naked skin. This serenade sings in my heart each time he draws near Desperate urges and needs filled my torrid mind I murmured in soft sighs against his stubbled cheek whispers of hunger I'd never before defined He sated desires I'd never thought I should seek Love was a passionate storm at my husband's side Where we floated on waves higher than at flood tide

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Robert Lindley

Date: 8/13/2017 12:02:00 PM

Very passionate and hot poetry my friend. Always a pleasure to read such great verses as they so oft relate to our own past experiences in life.. A fav...

Lin Lane
Date: 8/13/2017 12:11:00 PM

That they do, Robert. It's so much easier to write from our experiences, even those which have caused us pain. Thank you for being so encouraging.

Paul Callus

Date: 8/10/2017 11:54:00 AM

Beautiful...written with a romantic and passionate pen, Lin. Throwing caution to the wind is not always advisable, but it sure was worth it in this case! Regards // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 8/10/2017 12:09:00 PM

Thank you, Paul, and I have to agree with you for the worth of their romance.

Klio Tsitsikroni

Date: 8/9/2017 9:05:00 AM

Awesome! as always. You are truly gifted.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/9/2017 10:30:00 AM

Thank you for the many kind comments you leave for me. Each one is greatly appreciated, Klio.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/9/2017 1:35:00 AM

Very beautiful passionate poem..

Lin Lane
Date: 8/9/2017 10:29:00 AM

Thanks very much, Pashang.

Old Man Emu

Date: 8/8/2017 11:38:00 PM

Envy is me! Lovely sonnet enjoyed this gem very much. Regards, Craig

Lin Lane
Date: 8/9/2017 10:29:00 AM

Thank you for the great remarks you offer on this write, Craig.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/8/2017 5:10:00 PM

phew Lin you are on fire with this passionate sonnet ... you are such a versatile poet I love the way you write so beautifully at any form:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/9/2017 10:28:00 AM

You, dear friend, always make me smile with your sweet comments. Thank you ever so much, Jan. Hugs!