Lin Lane Poet Sonnet

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Murmurs and Soft Sighs

A storm blew in when I peered into those dark eyes
Fearing lightning would strike in bolts of midnight fire
Wanting his touch, though it might lead to my demise
Then full lips swept over mine, igniting desire

Thunder roared in my head with each deepening kiss
I heard it drumming in warm breaths against my ear
Fingertips danced lightly over naked skin.    This
serenade sings in my heart each time he draws near

Desperate urges and needs filled my torrid mind
I murmured in soft sighs against his stubbled cheek
whispers of hunger I'd never before defined
He sated desires I'd never thought I should seek

Love was a passionate storm at my husband's side
Where we floated on waves higher than at flood tide

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Robert Lindley August 13, 2017 at 12:02 PM Very passionate and hot poetry my friend. Always a pleasure to read such great verses as they so oft relate to our own past experiences in life.. A fav... Lin Lane August 13, 2017 at 12:11 PM That they do, Robert. It's so much easier to write from our experiences, even those which have caused us pain. Thank you for being so encouraging.

Paul Callus August 10, 2017 at 11:54 AM Beautiful...written with a romantic and passionate pen, Lin. Throwing caution to the wind is not always advisable, but it sure was worth it in this case! Regards // paul Lin Lane August 10, 2017 at 12:09 PM Thank you, Paul, and I have to agree with you for the worth of their romance.

Klio Tsitsikroni August 9, 2017 at 9:05 AM Awesome! as always. You are truly gifted. Lin Lane August 9, 2017 at 10:30 AM Thank you for the many kind comments you leave for me. Each one is greatly appreciated, Klio.

Pashang Salehi August 9, 2017 at 1:35 AM Very beautiful passionate poem.. Lin Lane August 9, 2017 at 10:29 AM Thanks very much, Pashang.

Old Man Emu August 8, 2017 at 11:38 PM Envy is me! Lovely sonnet enjoyed this gem very much. Regards, Craig Lin Lane August 9, 2017 at 10:29 AM Thank you for the great remarks you offer on this write, Craig.

Jan Allison August 8, 2017 at 5:10 PM phew Lin you are on fire with this passionate sonnet ... you are such a versatile poet I love the way you write so beautifully at any form:-) hugs jan xx Lin Lane August 9, 2017 at 10:28 AM You, dear friend, always make me smile with your sweet comments. Thank you ever so much, Jan. Hugs!

Tim Smith August 8, 2017 at 11:43 AM Murmurs and soft sighs...you had me there Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 12:08 PM I like your melting point. Thanks, Tim.

Vijay Pandit August 8, 2017 at 10:46 AM Lovely love poem! Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 12:08 PM Thank you very much.

Lim'Rik Flats August 8, 2017 at 9:42 AM I haven't had to take a cold shower for a quite a while... ;-) Sizzl'n! Seriously —beautiful write. ~ j Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 12:08 PM Well thank you, j. I appreciate you for reading and commenting ;-)

Ct Duet August 8, 2017 at 9:40 AM Pation galore Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 12:07 PM Merci, CT.

Charlie Smith August 8, 2017 at 9:13 AM Such great passion Lin, a beautiful write... Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 12:06 PM I'm happy you like it so well, Charlie. Thank you.

White Wolf August 8, 2017 at 8:16 AM Love the painting too! I'm faving this one Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 9:07 AM Thanks again for the favoring.

White Wolf August 8, 2017 at 8:11 AM A 12 syllable sonnet! You are a true wordsmith, Lin! This is one of the best sonnets I've read in a long time! Awesome Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 9:07 AM I'm not sure about being a wordsmith, lol, but I use a lot of words. Seriously, I'm much beholding to your encouraging comments, WW. Thank you.

Russell Sivey August 8, 2017 at 7:53 AM What an intimate and sensual write my friend! I'm delighted to read such a powerful and marvelous poem, what a fabulous piece, Great Work!! Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 9:06 AM and I'm delighted that you have left me your wonderful comments, Russell. Thank you most gratefully.

Robert Lindley August 8, 2017 at 7:44 AM Beautifully written romantic sonnet. Clearly depicting true love and its great depth my friend.. A fav... Lin Lane August 8, 2017 at 9:05 AM Good morning, dear Robert, and thank you very much for your thoughts on this sighing sonnet.