Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

Murmuring Wings Ballet

Written: October 04, 2025

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An enticing tale of Sapphire
Embryonic resin — 
the dusk’s distilled desire
in marigold attire.
Etched in flame agate,
a mystic sphere—
twilight’s trembling lyre,
Its shimmer sings
to murmuring wings of swallows
as they dance
in dusk’s devout ballet.
October’s veil—
tuned in tangerine,
a hymn to night’s slow sway.

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Andrea Dietrich October 11, 2025 at 11:53 AM Gorgeous free verse here

Valsa George October 9, 2025 at 6:14 AM The twilight of the dusk and the swallows' ballet lead one to an enchanting world. This is beauty encapsulated.

Paige Hind October 5, 2025 at 7:50 PM Lovely concept..."murmuring wings"

sara Etgen-Baker October 5, 2025 at 5:35 PM your poem seemed mystical and subtly surreal. I found it captivating..especially liked: twilight’s trembling lyre,Its shimmer sings Your ability to communicate via poetic form and imagery is outstanding and impressive.