Murmur of Stream of Grief

When sad eyes sink at depth of dark to see
in the niche of soul, still like the deep sea,
find out where the drops you shed roll to lie
beyond the edge of scorched mind till they’re dry.

Mind then comes out of smoke to dance with glee
at soft pace like fleet of clouds that moves free
in the blue expanse of the seamless sky,
beguiled life spreads wings of joy and soars high.

Sunburst horizon glints the face of gloom,
in waned plants of wasteland buds again bloom,
their hued touch wafts to the heart shining bright
as it blends with glow of soul’s blissful light.

Billion drops of grief flow in stream from heart,
with its tuneful murmur new song will start.

April 20, 2021
Syllable count : 10 per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Contest : Your Best Sonnet This Year So Far
Sponsor : John Hamilton
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Y. Avatar
April 25, 2021 at 1:18 PM
Hi Subimal, Congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Stathakis Avatar
April 24, 2021 at 7:55 PM
Some superb phrasing in your poem. Congratulations Subimal.
Hamilton Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 10:22 AM
Another winning write Subimal, congrats!
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