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Murderous Thoughts of a Woman Scorned

Cheated on her three times, said it was her reluctance to marry Each time she took him back, finally on her finger his ring she’d carry But even as she wore it, her fickle lover cheated again She threw the chintzy ring at him -- cheap zirconium Knowing he had a gun in his car, stealthily she had to act Purchased a container filled with gas, a lighter in her pocket packed Drove to his neighborhood, parked down the street in a wooded lot Saw them making love through the window, her stomach tied in a knot Suddenly it occurred to her that her own life would be jeopardized Knowing she would be denied heaven, her fear was energized She threw the oil can away, made haste to a nearby church Praying aloud, she asked for guidance as on the pew she perched Contrite as always, seeking sympathy, next day he appeared at her door But instead of a man she saw a beast, in flames his soul would rest evermore Justice has a way of coming about; her murderous thoughts had vanished But from her life this pathetic loser would forever be banished
*Entry for Susan’s “Getting Away with Murder/Murderous Thoughts” By Carolyn Devonshire, October 4, 2011

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Date: 10/29/2011 2:53:00 PM
Great job Carolyn. Congratulations. Tony
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Date: 10/28/2011 2:41:00 PM
Good ending!!! very good Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 10/26/2011 11:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in my contest! Your character certainly had a change of heart - the only one in this contest I think, which made it very realistic. most of us change our minds and don't act on our avenging thoughts. i'm glad she saw the light and realized what a loser he was! great story :)
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Date: 10/26/2011 6:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Susan's "Getting Away with Murder" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/25/2011 3:36:00 AM
yep crossed swords with a woman scorned, yep she sacked me from a job, dehorned, cos she was the boss at work, i ignored, as me secretary mate said, and deplored, she heard the bitch say i was gone haw haw..
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Date: 10/24/2011 11:52:00 PM
Yes,I remember this one and glad to see it in the winner circle. Congrats to you, bucket list girl!!
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Date: 10/6/2011 10:22:00 PM
That a girl let love handle the revenge. what goes around comes around. Smile. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/6/2011 3:39:00 PM
Nice story with a positive ending.Enjoyed reading it Carolyn.Best wishes.
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Date: 10/6/2011 12:44:00 AM
THat had a great moral to it, Carolyn. Good one for the contest!
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Date: 10/5/2011 2:51:00 PM
Carolyn i love this, it takes a very strong person to come back from the edge, had to be a woman!... love David
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Date: 10/5/2011 10:15:00 AM
Clever piece, my friend - she should have just hired Serial Mom!
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Date: 10/5/2011 10:14:00 AM
Oooh...so close to going over the edge! Thankfully in the end she realized he wasn't worth it! A good write. xoxo Robert.
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Date: 10/5/2011 9:38:00 AM
You go girl! love this piece....I do believe in karmic justice..love you..BG
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Date: 10/5/2011 6:43:00 AM
Letting heaven play its course.
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Date: 10/4/2011 4:07:00 PM
This is a powerful poem Carolyn, I enjoyed it immensely! Everything within the write is so very true! Some people are incapable of change! I would be safe knowing that this person will never be coming back, peace at last!! Terrific work!!
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Date: 10/4/2011 4:07:00 PM
Hooray! Nut the lech. This is poetry with a vengeance Love it. Love, daver
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Date: 10/4/2011 3:34:00 PM
Enjoyed this creative work..Is it based on truth?..Reads like a winner to me..She made the right decision for most of the time the man that does that does not change unless he gets help..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Yes, we have several things in common...Sara
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