Murderous Intent

NARRATOR
Infatuation, mysterious, 
Must possess
A hello will be good, an offer
Of a drink,
And here comes the invite, 
Does it lead to a casual, or
Lengthy good night

HIM
My furniture's  sparse
I have a desk and books,
I hung clean tea towels on
The kitchen hooks.
I have a chair and a cat,
Time to go forward
No more chit chat.
I have wine in the fridge
And two glasses at the ready,
Must remember 
To keep my hand steady,
O forgot, also have a wife,
Who I promised to be faithful to
For the rest of my double life.
But full steam ahead, 
Yes, still in my pocket
I’ll put it back on 
after this evening’s affair
I’m excited, I’ll avoid
Her terrified stare.

NARRATOR  
This sleazy professor
Had succeeded in 
His dirty deeds
Three times before,
Would he succeed again,
And leave another stain,
A memento on his floor
At his secret flat,
By the front door.
	
HER
Wanted to pass her first 
Year at university, 
Noticed he was glib,
Certainly, no novice,
But would entice 
Him to promise.
Too quickly did he offer
An exemplary exam mark,
She somehow felt
Things were off track,
Saw a murderous
Glint In his eye, 
He was of slight build,
She noticed his hand 
And the knife and rope,
Dug her sharp nails
In his neck,
Alarmed and hurt
He hesitated, she pushed
Him and ran to the door,
Tripped and moved a 
Carpet which hid blood stains,
She put her hands to her ears
To block out the screams, 
Pain and fears,
In her mind,
She would make sure they find,
this evil man,
I will destroy him,
I can,
Fled down a flight of stairs
Into a busy street,
Where she mingled
With thousands of feet. 

NARRATOR 
Too late too late 
Bad guy,
For this you will fry,
And burn in hell,
Where are the 
Other bodies,
Now all you will
Spill, and
Have to tell.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Brown Avatar
January 7, 2022 at 5:24 PM
Jennifer: Hello there! This was a fascinating story. You ought to be working on a novel. You did an amazing job. Debra
Kiser Avatar
January 1, 2022 at 4:23 PM
Intensely good read; powerful.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 10:03 AM
WOW!!! What a story/write. You need to write books. Have a Blessed Christmas and 2022.......................
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 2:34 PM
Wonderful storytelling Jennifer, and quite true to life, some of these predators can become complacent in their messed up ways, and it usually leads to one small slip, in this case she got away, and hopefully nails the attacker good, thank you so much for your visit earlier, cheers David
Horne Avatar
December 8, 2021 at 7:20 AM
well told from all angles, my friend
Wolf Avatar
December 6, 2021 at 6:53 PM
Well, Jenn! 'Another day at the office,' I see. A murder here. A murder there. Pretty soon you're talking real blood. ~ Alfred Hitchock
Romios Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 4:38 PM
Great story telling, Jennifer mou! I remember having a crush on a college prof. Nothing came of it. At my daughters, she, being a great Rn to me. She’s at my house, visiting my cat now.i will be here for Christmas. Unable to walk safely right now happy holidays to all your family!
Kendrick Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 7:21 AM
Whoa!! What a tale and I believe that this happens not necessarily the killing but the affairs because the student/s want to get a decent grade, and this is very sad. I was captivated by this work and drawn in until the end. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
Gondolf Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 7:19 AM
I enjoyed reading this suspenseful story, Jenn, nicely done my friend. Hugs, John
Deo Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 6:31 AM
JENN, o dear, too much like South Africa and GBV news. I am afraid I do not know what to call my gender for not just rape, but mutilation of bodies. This ended somewhat "in justice" when a girlfriend found body parts in her guy's fridge & called in the police. Well-done with your own minii-drama. Very GREEK, Euripides (If U -Ripedes, you ought ToMendese) Low on Airtime, Eirene
Pandit Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 5:11 AM
A mini drama you wrote my friend with intriguing story. Splendid imagination and creativity, Jennifer.
Cunningham Avatar
December 5, 2021 at 2:04 AM
Great suspenseful story telling Jennifer, Hope you're keeping well. Tom
Kalita Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 6:50 PM
Such a gripping tale, a matchless oxymoron of dark and light... Silpika
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 3:29 PM
Hello Jennifer, wow! This kept me reading until the very end. I am also glad she gort away. Hugs. He will get caught. blessings my friend.
Ball Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 3:18 PM
This is a most riveting write my friend. Scary stuff! So glad she got away. Now they will catch him. Thanks for sharing this one. God Bless, JB
Awtry Avatar
December 4, 2021 at 2:57 PM
ooh... She got away and now he will pay! You had me on the edge of my seat!
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