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Murdered

Murder, she wrote in coloured pencil angels cried nothing but time abides where winds knock upon the window and there's no place left to hide So, don't you turn away just yet, for the crow has not begun to fly and the rum still hasn't gone dry Read, were splatters on the wall chatters chirped and crawled winters wept wonders called Roses shone a solemn tone and those whispers all just went away *Inspired by Arthur Vaso's flower series*

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Date: 11/17/2017 10:19:00 PM
Very moving poem - feels like a haunting melody. Love it.
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Date: 10/21/2017 5:07:00 PM
I meant missed leaving a comment!
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Date: 10/21/2017 5:06:00 PM
wow, I know you mentioned this, somehow I missed this one, is amazing Tim! :)
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:57:00 PM
Wow! This is great! Have a ni ce evening my friend.
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Date: 9/11/2017 2:10:00 PM
Nice write Tim:)
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Date: 9/10/2017 7:51:00 PM
A lovely write Tim, beautifully and artistically expressed. A joy to read this evening :)
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Date: 9/10/2017 5:20:00 PM
Imagery is wonder,Tim, enjoyed reading . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/10/2017 4:47:00 PM
First of all, this is gorgeous. In your 6th line should "crow" be plural? In your 8th line should "were" be "where", or was "read" splattered on the wall? I'm a little confused. You're telling me a moving, complex story that I'm having some trouble grasping. I think you're telling me not to give up hope just yet.
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Date: 9/10/2017 2:02:00 PM
- ... everything died (?), Tim - If the angels cry ... it's just sad ... it is a murder of the feelings - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/10/2017 1:14:00 PM
We will keep flowers close, rum close, friends close, then we will live, love and survive.
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Date: 9/10/2017 11:39:00 AM
Lovely Tim.. very poetic!
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Date: 9/10/2017 11:07:00 AM
Very well written Tim! The ending is amazing.
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