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Murder In the Tunnel

She walks ruggedly in an abandoned long tunnel; Her feet ~ as heavy as the stale steel rails almost buried in forgotten soil; Her hands as cold as tombstone's plate as she grips her pen and begins to write the obscure murder of the man in blue suit~ and the deaths of twelve passengers still unsolved... She was here some decades ago~ aboard in an old steam train The memory of that macabre ride haunted her for thousand days and nights. She writes in scarlet ink on a bloodstained scroll that says like this, " To all the victims who died here, I lay my hands before this forgotten tunnel; and the woeful wall as my witness~ I never thought too much love would kill. I killed my beloved man in blue suit, the driver of that tortuous train journey... Yes I killed him to save the three million people dwelling on the final station; Using the twelve infected people, He was sent to spread that virus that would change the world. I didn't understand till now~ Yes, I killed him with a knife and unlocked that explosive weapon before it reached its final destination. But I was spared~ not the twelve people; Now, to the authority I shall submit myself. So help me God." 02.01.2021 For a Murder in the tunnel poetry contest Sponsored by Kai Michael Newmann (unable to submit for the contest)

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Date: 2/24/2022 7:47:00 PM
This is a haunting, rather ghostly story of crime and punishment! This blood curdling incident supposed to have happened decades back still resonates with some dreadful incidents taking place now !I felt as if watching a horror movie !
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Date: 2/2/2021 3:28:00 PM
Wow, JCB! It really feels like a haunting story - I was scared! It's so unfortunate you forgot to enter this remarkable work in the contest. Okay, no worries. More opportunities will come to showcase your storytelling talent! Love ~ Mala
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Date: 2/2/2021 3:36:00 PM
It's fine dear Mala..The inspiration of that contest is enough for me..At least I have tried my first murder story haha..Thank you for your inspiring words..
Date: 2/2/2021 6:48:00 AM
It’s almost feels like a true story. Great write, JCB, and best wishes in the contest.
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Date: 2/2/2021 7:41:00 AM
Thank you Akkina but I forgot to enter this poem on that contest..when I realised it was already closed..
Date: 2/1/2021 10:40:00 AM
A haunting, compelling read? So nice to meet you and link thru our poems, Easy to tell your love of language. A most admirable pen!
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