Murder In the Tunnel

She walks ruggedly
in an abandoned long tunnel;
Her feet ~ as heavy as the stale steel rails
almost buried in forgotten soil;
Her hands as cold as tombstone's plate
as she grips her pen
and begins to write the obscure murder
of the man in blue suit~
and the deaths of twelve passengers
still unsolved...

She was here some decades ago~
aboard in an old steam train
The memory of  that macabre ride
haunted her for thousand days and nights.

She writes in scarlet ink
on a bloodstained scroll
that says like this,
" To all the victims who died here,
I lay my hands before this forgotten tunnel;
and the woeful wall as my witness~
I never thought too much love would kill.
I killed my beloved man in blue suit,
the driver of that  tortuous train journey...
Yes I killed him to save the three million people
dwelling on the final station;
Using the twelve infected people,
He was sent to spread that virus
that would change the world.

I didn't understand till now~

Yes, I killed him with a knife
and unlocked that explosive weapon
before it reached its final destination.
But I was spared~
not the twelve people;
Now, to the authority I shall submit myself.
So help me God."


02.01.2021

For a Murder in the tunnel poetry contest
Sponsored by Kai Michael Newmann
(unable to submit for the contest)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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George Avatar
February 24, 2022 at 7:47 PM
This is a haunting, rather ghostly story of crime and punishment! This blood curdling incident supposed to have happened decades back still resonates with some dreadful incidents taking place now !I felt as if watching a horror movie !
Ray Choudhury Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Wow, JCB! It really feels like a haunting story - I was scared! It's so unfortunate you forgot to enter this remarkable work in the contest. Okay, no worries. More opportunities will come to showcase your storytelling talent! Love ~ Mala
Brul Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 3:36 PM
It's fine dear Mala..The inspiration of that contest is enough for me..At least I have tried my first murder story haha..Thank you for your inspiring words..
Downing  Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 6:48 AM
It’s almost feels like a true story. Great write, JCB, and best wishes in the contest.
Brul Avatar
February 2, 2021 at 7:41 AM
Thank you Akkina but I forgot to enter this poem on that contest..when I realised it was already closed..
Eslinger Avatar
February 1, 2021 at 10:40 AM
A haunting, compelling read? So nice to meet you and link thru our poems, Easy to tell your love of language. A most admirable pen!
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