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Murder In the Tunnel

He pushed his shopping cart towards the empty tunnel it was full of rattling empties and a brave cocker spaniel a penniless vagabond hiding from the rainy day pummel wet, cold, and hungry hunching closer to Jack Daniel he shared with his dog, a little square of flannel Along came a mosquito with a straw-like mouth and crawled into the bottle with an empty spout The hobo drunk on booze in a stupor from the sauce shut the insect in then hollered " so now whos boss !" the dog did bark but heh, he wasn't in the land of Oz so on his knees the hobo went and soon began to pray "I didn't have to murder him so why did I, oh why oh why " and then the echo came from the empty tunnel's way "Don't cry my child after all it was just a fly !" confessed and reassured the hobo slept until the light of day. January 27, 2021 Contest Name: Murder In The Tunnel

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Date: 2/13/2021 6:10:00 PM
Confucius says, first it was a mosquito then a fly ? Doesn't matter it still a great write my friend. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/12/2021 10:17:00 AM
Congratulations on your winning placement, I hope the dog was ok? :-)
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Date: 2/12/2021 10:06:00 AM
Such a wonderous story.... blessed and a blessing... love and prayers sent your way and Congrats on this wonderful winning entry. God bless you always, Gina
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Date: 2/12/2021 7:11:00 AM
- Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, really creative Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/12/2021 6:59:00 AM
Great picture you paint and the message is outstanding. :) Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 2/12/2021 5:47:00 AM
Wonderful write. congratulations on your premier contest win. Really liked his guilt, confession and reassuring from God. Take care Rama
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Date: 2/12/2021 3:36:00 AM
Kindness prevails. Congratulations and kins wishes, Kai
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Date: 2/12/2021 3:36:00 AM
Kindness prevails. Congratulations and kins wishes, Kai
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Date: 1/31/2021 12:31:00 PM
I have been reading many of your poems. Like your line here, "Along came a mosquito with a straw-like mouth." The next mosquito I see I will need to take a better look. Best wishes in the contest. Have a day/week with blessings.................
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Date: 1/28/2021 11:31:00 AM
Hello Mystic Rose, Rose, thank you for the laughter. Enjoy your day my friend. x. hsve a nice day my friend.
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Date: 1/28/2021 10:59:00 AM
Jack Daniels always lifts one's spirit! Aloha! Rico
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Date: 1/28/2021 5:40:00 AM
Very creative my friend--your gifted pen shines. This was fun to read.
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Date: 1/27/2021 10:27:00 PM
Hobo more spiritual than most of us! Enjoyed your write, good luck for the contest!
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