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Premiere Contest WinnerMural Matrix: Ekphrasis - After Egon Schiele’s Dead Mother

Written: August 27, 2026, for a contest sponsored by Brian Strand


Discover the profound intensity of Egon Schiele's "Dead Mother" (1910). This evocative piece, executed in oil on canvas, showcases Schiele’s signature expressionist style, marked by distorted forms and raw emotional depth.
************************** a body beclouded — bruised bones blood gone brittle barely beating bonds below bosom an ash-carved cradle— cold. . . obsidian. . . a lifeless hand cradles mute screams & black oaks shrouding her cold this eclipse is unnoticed — no censers sway in mourning,     the universe collapses to a single node               of visceral isolation             a star clings to its core trapped inside her                                    [ cage ]    untouched by dark — feed me, fledgling feasts — on slithering worms sunk beneath the flesh a trapped crimson pulse a buried spark flung into her cold mass tethered. . . heat-struck. . . severely sealed. . . her skeletal ribs around his thin limbs a heavy gyre against blinding— neon flare he nests within the pallid corpse staring through tissue at his universe unravels — her soul receding beast of death consumes her life shatters — no crystal path just tacks splinter or no way through his eyes, dimmed by darkness — a true epicenter of her splintered womb fixed in a blind. . . unblinking. . . sinking. . . mother crack bone by bone— creeps cold through his blood ribs fold inward a suffocating shroud around his little burning vessel trapped on a frozen m u r k y sea he is a raw nerve — her defensive posture hardens into an a r c h e t y p a l shield a silent human anchor— wailing through katabatic a b y s s he alone witnesses—his dawn collapse in her stance in her trembling bones in his shattered gaze tragedy seeps from the canvas not a rehearsed grief of adults but a child's primal wonder awakening to one terrible truth flesh can die— & life is frail a billboard bleeds — battered bond    a tendon trellis torn by turbid tangle—       here housed — in heavy horrors          stark sweeps seal the stupor shut—           wistful waif wandering—wasted wildling mortal magnum opus moored in a mural matrix — gathered girdled grazing grates clutching to his mother's ceremonial cloak as her pulse pivots into perpetual peace. . . a d a m a n t i n e a l a b a s t e r a l b e s c e n t a s h y a n a t o m y
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Kendrick Avatar
September 24, 2026 at 5:02 AM
Back with congratulations on your winner. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K. 👏✍️
Kauffman Avatar
September 21, 2026 at 12:15 PM
Congratulations on your trophy win, Lasaad. Your images are as raw and unsettling as the painting as you capture grief that is unable to re-capture life slipping away. Your carefully chosen words reflect the torment of loss. I also love your formatting that captures the essence chaotic trauma. Sending you blessings of peace, my friend!
Buehler Avatar
September 11, 2026 at 4:10 PM
This is truly an amazing ekphrasis, Sotto! Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win. 😊✍️👍
MITRA Avatar
September 8, 2026 at 10:04 PM
Dear Sir Poet, 🌸 A feast unto mine eyes, verily! I oft do wonder, whilst gazing upon such exquisite art, whether I behold the handiwork of a poet who hath taken the designer’s quill—or a designer whose soul hath secretly been schooled by Poesy. For here am I, beguiled betwixt two enchantments: reading with the mind, yet marvelling with the eye; and ere I know it, both are borne away upon the selfsame tide of wonder. And so must I needs sing thee unto thy proper glory— 🙌 ✨"How great thou art… how wondrously great thou art!"✨ Mine gratitude, good Supernal Sir, for having wrought and rendered such splendid beauty before the eyes of a poor and most willing admirer, who doth stand, Sotto Voce, enchanted. 💕🌹
Dietrich Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 10:49 PM
Big congrats. I can see how this got a trophy! 👏
Kendrick Avatar
September 6, 2026 at 4:50 AM
Kind of dark expressing of grief of the artist, Lasaad. Sad to lose one we love and something hard to deal with, but I see he handled it using is artist outlet. Creative lines of yours to describe it. Way to go. 👏✍️. Sara K.
Hind Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 4:50 PM
such moving art with a most worthy poem to accompany it- fav
Anaya Avatar
August 30, 2026 at 8:13 AM
Such an intuitive cadence & masterpiece breathtaking indeed. I loved the entire experience within almost one breathe, the audio helped give the museum experience, it was like being there. 🌹👏 Huge congratulations on a trophy win most deserving Soto Poet! Blessings 🕊️now i'm on puter & see a beautiful shapely display as well. :)
George Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 10:20 PM
Simply breathtaking with the use of choicest words, string of thoughts firmly tied in the sequence of powerful metaphors and excellent alliteration. This piece of painting affirms the perpetual truth- "flesh can die— & life is frail". No one must have ever invested this piece of art such amazing dimensions that break forth the confines of its frame. Kudos to the great versifier... ! With this poem, I feel you can be crowned a poet laureate. ✍️Congratulations on your well deserved trophy win🔥💕👏👍
Guptar Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 10:50 AM
Congratulations dear poet on your top win in this contest with as usual a superb gem, sparkling with imagery, an unmatched diction, a fluid flow which makes the painting alive. So many of the words used are above the common ken. I wonder how long it would taken you to carve succh a masterpiece. Wishing you a very blessed forthcoming weekend.
Kerr Avatar
August 28, 2026 at 5:04 AM
Congratulations to you Sotto on your achievement. Your poem excells on every poetic barometer. Superb vocabulary, vivid diction, a narrative that remains focussed with vital anchor words. Carefully chosen lines crafted, and imagery to enhance feeling. Magnificent.🔥🔥🔥🔥 Howard
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 27, 2026 at 2:37 PM
just wow! Captivating alliteration that doesn't distract from your poem's meaning. Applause!
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