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Mummy's Little Soldier

Look at little Danny, playing with his gun, Running around the garden, Mouth full of chewing-gum, Hiding in the bushes, Rustling through the trees looking for the enemy, Crawling on his knee's, Suddenly he spies them, And aims to take his shot, The bullet fire he imitates, With bubble-gum pops!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/6/2008 4:54:00 PM
This such an adorable write. This write brings me back to my little boy and how he just a boy. the rhyming works well and the poem flows very well.
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Date: 11/6/2008 4:02:00 PM
Julie, you're the poetic gun shooting out poems.
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Date: 11/6/2008 2:18:00 PM
Julie wondeful poem Very creative. Really enjoyed. Michael Torres
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